Lost in the moment
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Lost in the moment
*~LOST IN THE MOMENT~*
You lay outside
Look up at the sky
The deep blue so dense
You close your eyes
the sun warms your face
The cool breeze is gentle comfort
Like a blanket lined with lace
The grass is gently blowing.
The sun shines beams through the trees
The perfect day
The perfect time
Perfectly comfortable
Perfectly right
Perfectly sound
Problems out of sight
You close your eyes
You gently sigh
And you realize
Your lost in the moment.
And your okay.
Last edited by SkyLight on 2/3/2010, 1:22 am; edited 2 times in total
SkyLight- Short Short Maker
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Re: Lost in the moment
Thankyou so much. It reminds of some of the times in my life that you just feel perfectly, happy.
SkyLight- Short Short Maker
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Re: Lost in the moment
I added color to my poem!
SkyLight- Short Short Maker
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Re: Lost in the moment
Woah! The color adds a touch of extra emotion . . . that's so, so cool. I might try that some time. :3
Re: Lost in the moment
This is beautiful! I love the color. ;D
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Re: Lost in the moment
Thanks. I thought the color was a nice touch.
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