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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/29/2010, 8:51 pm

You are not forgiven,
And never will you even be.

Because of what you've done,
I am lost and hopeless.

Just like you used to be,
Without my presence.

I cry every night,
As reality deeply hits me.

But these wounds shall never heal,
When they just aren't real.

And every single day,
I bleed the life out of me.

And it's all your fault.
Because you will not,
Nay, Never,
Be forgiven.
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Post by xSophiexx16 1/29/2010, 8:52 pm

Oooh! Good job. I really like this. (:
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/29/2010, 8:57 pm

Thanks. :33
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Post by Crystal Aura 1/29/2010, 10:10 pm

Pretty good, coolsmiley
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/29/2010, 11:09 pm

Thanks. :3
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/30/2010, 10:33 am

In an alternate reality where Shadow isn't so happy, that poem would be about me. xD

Wonderful job. ^^
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Post by Arianna 1/30/2010, 11:10 am

Pretty good, Mia. ;D I love the formatting, as always. Very Happy xD
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/30/2010, 8:52 pm

Thanks, guys!
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