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Post by Puckspaw 5/21/2010, 2:28 pm

Maturity: Lowish? .:::. Fantasy: None

I can see it now, I can see him coming down the road, with a crown made up of thorns that was placed upon his head and the cross on his back. He looks broken and saddened because he knows what's about to take place. I can hear the crowd yelling, "Crucify, crucify," their faces are burning with anger. Some are overwhelmed with sadness, while others just look hurt, and I just stand there puzzled as he passes me by. When he reaches the top of the hill, they push the cross into the ground then they lift him up and they nail him to it. After they did this, I saw him lift his head to pray and I heard him say, "Father, please forgive them, for they know not what they do." As he spoke I fell to the ground in tears. On that day I knew I was truly forgiven.


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Post by shadowsowner888 5/21/2010, 9:59 pm

Is this all? :O Or will there be more?

Either way, wonderful job, Puck. ^^ (But please remember that you need to have the m&f in the first post. Wink)
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Post by Puckspaw 5/22/2010, 7:57 am

Um, I think there might be more, but my brother actually wrote it and asked me to post it here, so I'm not really sure yet.

Oops, sorry!
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