Imperfection in your Reflection
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Imperfection in your Reflection
Maturity: Rated PG, pretty much. Fantasy: none really
Imperfection in your Reflection:
In the mirror:
A different person you see.
What you see is a tradgedy.
The mirror, the mirror
it tells you lies.
The compliments you recieve
it only defies.
Your too FAT.
Your too SKINNY.
Your OVERWEIGHT.
You believe your stuck in this problematic state.
It murders your self esteem.
Mirror, oh mirror, why are you mean?
The mirror,
its BLINDING
the mirror,
It's BINDING.
It screams what you think you are
It gleams an image, not deep, not far.
Why do we think the mirror is right?
That horrid image you contrew in your sight.
Your skinny.
your gaunt.
Your fat.
your blunt.
The mirror FALLS as you decide for yourself.
the mirror breaks...
You finally realize, through the shattered lies, that your inner self
is great.
All you had seen was
IMPERFECTION
IN YOUR
REFLECTION
Imperfection in your Reflection:
In the mirror:
A different person you see.
What you see is a tradgedy.
The mirror, the mirror
it tells you lies.
The compliments you recieve
it only defies.
Your too FAT.
Your too SKINNY.
Your OVERWEIGHT.
You believe your stuck in this problematic state.
It murders your self esteem.
Mirror, oh mirror, why are you mean?
The mirror,
its BLINDING
the mirror,
It's BINDING.
It screams what you think you are
It gleams an image, not deep, not far.
Why do we think the mirror is right?
That horrid image you contrew in your sight.
Your skinny.
your gaunt.
Your fat.
your blunt.
The mirror FALLS as you decide for yourself.
the mirror breaks...
You finally realize, through the shattered lies, that your inner self
is great.
All you had seen was
IMPERFECTION
IN YOUR
REFLECTION
SkyLight- Short Short Maker
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Re: Imperfection in your Reflection
Wow, this is really cool. It kinda rhymed without sounding forced or cheesy, which I really like, because I can't rhym at all. xD
Anyways, nice job.
Anyways, nice job.
Imagine- Short Short Maker
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Re: Imperfection in your Reflection
Thanks Imagine! That was nice of you to say
SkyLight- Short Short Maker
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Re: Imperfection in your Reflection
You're welcomez!
Imagine- Short Short Maker
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Re: Imperfection in your Reflection
Amazing poem! I love how different it is, and a great message.
FOREIGN?!- Novel Creator
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Re: Imperfection in your Reflection
Sweeet. xD Makes me think about whether mirrors are really so nice after all . . .
Re: Imperfection in your Reflection
Thanks foreign!
Yeah, shadow. The average teen walks up to a mirror now and thinks "Do I look fat in this?" or "Oh, I look sooo skinny. Like a toothpick. That's horrible." The point I was trying to get across was that your inner beauty is what really matters and that you need to accept yourself as you are.
Yeah, shadow. The average teen walks up to a mirror now and thinks "Do I look fat in this?" or "Oh, I look sooo skinny. Like a toothpick. That's horrible." The point I was trying to get across was that your inner beauty is what really matters and that you need to accept yourself as you are.
SkyLight- Short Short Maker
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Re: Imperfection in your Reflection
Great poem. Even better message.
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Re: Imperfection in your Reflection
Thankyou!
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