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I'm Your Reflection- Your Infection

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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/7/2010, 10:47 am

Maturity; HIGH HIGH HIGH. 8D
Fantasy; Average? Razz
I think I've finally gotten back into the dark poetry buiseness! :3


What if I told you I was your reflection?
Or if I was nothing but a deadly infection?
Would you kill yourself, covered in pure red?
Or make it quick, and you wouldn't have bled?

Your veins contain blood, whether red or black.
Your bones are all to the point, that they'll crack.
Your smile is crushed and now fully broken,
Your emotions can no longer be spoken.

I'm nothing but your shattered reflection,
Bringing you down like a cursed infection.
You say you have a heart, but are you serious?
They've said your heart is covered in shadows, quite mysterious.

You think you're just like me, a demon of no worth,
The biggest terror of this world... your birth.
Thinking you're speaking the truth about it all,
Yet, you still haven't taken your own fall.

I am your reflection, and nothing more,
I am the infection you try to ignore.
I turn your heart pitch black and stone-cold,
I replaced your soul, the one I sold.

The only time you will be free,
Is the day you figure to remove me.
But until then, I'll bring you down,
And in your blood, you shall drown.


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Post by conich 7/7/2010, 1:41 pm

this is really good! you have definetly gotten into the dark poetry business Wink
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/7/2010, 1:44 pm

I've always been in the dark poetry buiseness. smug
It's so bad, that long ago, when a poem would be marked as "High Maturity" because of violence, it would instead be known as "Maturity; Mia". grin
Loved that. X3

But anyway, yeah, thanks! ^///^
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Post by conich 7/7/2010, 1:54 pm

Ur welcome Smile
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Post by Rai 7/7/2010, 3:57 pm

Oh my goodness.
o-o
This is really, really amazing, Mia! o-o
I cannot believe your only 12. That's so so so brilliant.

GAH.
I love, love, love, love, love your poems.
You have some serious talenttt. nod
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/7/2010, 4:07 pm

Heh, thanks! hi there!

Being 12 sometimes annoys me, though. >,>
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Post by Novastare 7/7/2010, 5:36 pm

I think you were born in the dark poetry business, lol. Amazing job, you've done it again! I felt I was looking down into a pool of blood and seeing some dark person's reflection. The words are great, and the darkness is back! Beautiful job!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/7/2010, 5:44 pm

Yay!
Thank you, Nova! cheesy
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Post by Johnny Gal 7/8/2010, 12:13 pm

love it mia! it is so clever!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/8/2010, 3:44 pm

Teheh, tanku my friend! 8D
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