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Fugitive's Warning (Gracias, Cyn. :D)

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Post by Avé 3/4/2010, 12:34 am

Be prepared; they want to try you
If you stop, they won't get by you
If you scream, be sure they hear you
Don't be scared, know they fear you

Don't look back, they will replace you
If you run, they'll always chase you
If you walk, they'll never catch you
Be sure to know they will attack you

If you cry, don't let them see you
Do not try, they'll never free you
If you die, hope that they knew you
Say goodbye, it's never been true

If you see the light, they'll blind you
If you hide, they'll always find you
Don't hesitate, they'll try to break you
If you love, know that they hate you


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Post by rattyjol 3/4/2010, 1:23 am

Whoaaa... that's amazing. Maybe you could call it "Know That They Hate You"?
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/4/2010, 9:48 am

Aaaaawesome poem! Very Happy Maybe you could call it 'Don't'?
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/4/2010, 11:54 am

Woah. Surprised That poem pwns, Avvy.
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Post by Avé 3/4/2010, 4:40 pm

Thanks. Smile

Hmm.. I like "Know That They Hate You," and I like "Don't", but I can't imagine it with that kind of title. :/ Thanks anyway, you two, for the suggestions. ^-^
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/5/2010, 1:34 pm

I think you should call it "THEY." >3
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/5/2010, 9:45 pm

Ooh, I like Shadows' idea. Very Happy
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Post by Puckspaw 3/6/2010, 12:40 am

Really awesome poem! Very Happy Perhaps "Be Prepared"?
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Post by Cyn431 3/9/2010, 7:06 pm

Your poems continue to amaze me, Ave. Very Happy Good work here!

Hm... I like Shadow's suggestion, same with the others (but Shadow's in particular xD). nod If you want me to contribute something, I was thinking "Fugitive's Warning," or something along those lines...
I have another idea, too, but I'm having trouble putting it to words. It keeps making me think of a courtroom session, and a criminal. I guess I'm trying to get things along the lines of Merciless? xP
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Post by Avé 3/9/2010, 7:26 pm

Thanks. Smile

Cyn, I absolutely love that. Do you mind if I make it the title?
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Post by Cyn431 3/9/2010, 8:10 pm

You're welcome!

De nada, Ave. grin (An implied yes.)
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