Fugitive's Warning (Gracias, Cyn. :D)
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Fugitive's Warning (Gracias, Cyn. :D)
Be prepared; they want to try you
If you stop, they won't get by you
If you scream, be sure they hear you
Don't be scared, know they fear you
Don't look back, they will replace you
If you run, they'll always chase you
If you walk, they'll never catch you
Be sure to know they will attack you
If you cry, don't let them see you
Do not try, they'll never free you
If you die, hope that they knew you
Say goodbye, it's never been true
If you see the light, they'll blind you
If you hide, they'll always find you
Don't hesitate, they'll try to break you
If you love, know that they hate you
If you stop, they won't get by you
If you scream, be sure they hear you
Don't be scared, know they fear you
Don't look back, they will replace you
If you run, they'll always chase you
If you walk, they'll never catch you
Be sure to know they will attack you
If you cry, don't let them see you
Do not try, they'll never free you
If you die, hope that they knew you
Say goodbye, it's never been true
If you see the light, they'll blind you
If you hide, they'll always find you
Don't hesitate, they'll try to break you
If you love, know that they hate you
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Re: Fugitive's Warning (Gracias, Cyn. :D)
Whoaaa... that's amazing. Maybe you could call it "Know That They Hate You"?
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Re: Fugitive's Warning (Gracias, Cyn. :D)
Aaaaawesome poem! Maybe you could call it 'Don't'?
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Re: Fugitive's Warning (Gracias, Cyn. :D)
Thanks.
Hmm.. I like "Know That They Hate You," and I like "Don't", but I can't imagine it with that kind of title. :/ Thanks anyway, you two, for the suggestions. ^-^
Hmm.. I like "Know That They Hate You," and I like "Don't", but I can't imagine it with that kind of title. :/ Thanks anyway, you two, for the suggestions. ^-^
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Re: Fugitive's Warning (Gracias, Cyn. :D)
Really awesome poem! Perhaps "Be Prepared"?
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Re: Fugitive's Warning (Gracias, Cyn. :D)
Your poems continue to amaze me, Ave. Good work here!
Hm... I like Shadow's suggestion, same with the others (but Shadow's in particular xD). If you want me to contribute something, I was thinking "Fugitive's Warning," or something along those lines...
I have another idea, too, but I'm having trouble putting it to words. It keeps making me think of a courtroom session, and a criminal. I guess I'm trying to get things along the lines of Merciless? xP
Hm... I like Shadow's suggestion, same with the others (but Shadow's in particular xD). If you want me to contribute something, I was thinking "Fugitive's Warning," or something along those lines...
I have another idea, too, but I'm having trouble putting it to words. It keeps making me think of a courtroom session, and a criminal. I guess I'm trying to get things along the lines of Merciless? xP
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Re: Fugitive's Warning (Gracias, Cyn. :D)
Thanks.
Cyn, I absolutely love that. Do you mind if I make it the title?
Cyn, I absolutely love that. Do you mind if I make it the title?
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Re: Fugitive's Warning (Gracias, Cyn. :D)
You're welcome!
De nada, Ave. (An implied yes.)
De nada, Ave. (An implied yes.)
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