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Post by DreamCatcher81 3/7/2010, 2:24 am

Life Isn’t A Fairytale

If life was a fairytale,
And you were Prince Charming,
I could have been your Cinderella,
I could’ve been your happy ending,
But the shoe you gave me to wear,
Was much too big for me to fill.

If life was a fairytale,
And you were Prince Charming,
I could’ve been your Snow White,
I could’ve been your happy ending,
But your love was a poisoned apple,
And I should’ve never taken a bite.

If life was a fairytale,
And you were Prince Charming,
I could’ve been your Beauty Belle,
I could’ve been your happy ending,
But your charismatic looks fooled me,
You were a beast inside, not outside.

If life was a fairytale,
And you were Prince Charming,
I could’ve been your Little Mermaid,
I could’ve been your happy ending,
But you were worse than the sea witch,
The spell you cast on me proves that.

If life was a fairytale,
And you were Prince Charming,
I could’ve been your Princess Jasmine,
I could’ve been your happy ending,
But you were obviously not Aladin,
Instead you were more like Jafar.

If life was a fairytale,
And you were Prince Charming,
I could’ve been your Sleeping Beauty,
I could’ve been your happy ending,
But you wouldn’t fight the queen for me,
I wasn’t worth the effort, I was only being used.

If life was a fairytale,
And you were Prince Charming,
I could’ve been your Mulan,
I could’ve been your happy ending,
But you thought I was foolish for dreaming,
And I should just listen to what you told me.

If life was a fairytale,
And you were Prince Charming,
I could’ve been your Pocahontas,
I could’ve been your happy ending,
But you wouldn’t risk the social suicide,
Because you thought I wasn’t good enough.

If life was a fairytale,
And you were Prince Charming,
I could’ve been your Princess Tiana,
I could’ve been your happy ending,
But I expected you to change when we kissed,
And I realized you were still selfish and conceited.

Because life isn’t a fairytale,
And the story never ends as,
Happily ever after.
And the story only ends as,
Happily never after!
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Post by Akeria 3/7/2010, 10:36 am

This is really good, Dream.
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/7/2010, 11:36 am

Aww, great job, Dream! I love all the references to Disney princesses. xD
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Post by DreamCatcher81 3/7/2010, 6:59 pm

Thanks guys! cheesy
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 3/7/2010, 9:32 pm

I love it! I'm so glad you did Pocahontas(I'm a nerd when it comes to Disney Princesses xD) Also for Ariel you could've referred to her losing her voice... Just an idea (: I really love it. By far my favorite poem on this site lol.
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Post by leah_hope92 3/7/2010, 9:40 pm

Ooo! I really like this, next I'm going to nominate this for Poem of the Month. (: I liked how you refered to the Disney princesses also. xD
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Post by LuckyPenny666 3/7/2010, 9:48 pm

This is amazing! cheesy You did a fantastic job connecting your ideas and the princesses' stories.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 3/7/2010, 9:51 pm

Awe thanks guys!
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Post by rattyjol 3/7/2010, 11:08 pm

Awesome poem, Dream. Smile
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Post by Nightowl 3/7/2010, 11:36 pm

Love it! Very Happy
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Post by DreamCatcher81 3/8/2010, 1:19 am

cheesy Thanks.
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Post by cutypie 3/10/2010, 12:26 am

I just nominated this in featured! I really really like the metaphor and stuff. Very Happy
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Post by DreamCatcher81 3/10/2010, 12:32 am

Oh my gosh! Thanks soooooooo much Cuty!
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 3/10/2010, 5:26 am

Soo cool! I love the princesses; it made it into more then just a cliched Happily Never After poem Very Happy
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Post by DreamCatcher81 3/23/2010, 10:23 pm

Thanks so much! cheesy
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Post by Puckspaw 3/24/2010, 6:32 pm

Wow. Fantastic job, Dream! I love it!
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Post by DreamCatcher81 6/24/2010, 12:23 am

Thanks cheesy
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