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Post by DiscardedHarmony 3/8/2010, 2:20 am

The flat gray wall,
specked with glittering,
peeking eyes.
A woman,
dressed in blushing rose pinks,
and creamy yellows.
Slowly,
the twinkling eyes fade,
replaced by an evanescent light.
Hesitantly,
the folds of her dress reach out,
and light up the gray.
Quietly,
leaves and branches stand out in perfect detail,
as they're lit from above.
And now the creases of the fabric,
fall softly around the world,
nestling it in her embrace of warmth.
And now,
it is morning,
and the sun has banished the night.
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/8/2010, 9:42 pm

Aww, lovely job, Harmony. ^^

Hey, I should call you Ed! :O
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 3/8/2010, 9:43 pm

Thank youu! Smile
And why? xD
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/8/2010, 9:58 pm

Cus those are the letters in the middle-ish of your name. Very Happy
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/9/2010, 10:02 am

*gasp* ED! xD

I love the poem, Ed/Harmony! nod
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 3/9/2010, 6:29 pm

Rofl, I like it :< You may now call me Ed xD
And thanks Foreign Smile
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Post by Avé 3/9/2010, 7:01 pm

Ed? That works.

Nice job, Ed. xD I love this. <3
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/9/2010, 10:25 pm

YAY! *this has been another unusual nickname brought to you by Shadow Studios* I hope to see more poems from you soon, Ed. wink
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