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Post by pirox_2012 3/23/2010, 6:24 pm

maturity: pg, fantasy: none

how much does it hurt to see your face,
enough that I cry in my own little space,
So much I want to run away,
To be anywhere but this horrid place

You will never love me,
I will have to accept how it will be,
To look at you and not see,
the love I wish you had for me

Now I am sad, not like you care
It's something that I thought I should share,
so goodnight love, I will see you in my dreams,
the only place you will ever be with me
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Post by pirox_2012 3/23/2010, 6:26 pm

I know, I write depressing stuff:(, sorry if I make you sad. Mad
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/23/2010, 6:42 pm

I love your poems. Yeah they're sad, but they're sweet. ^^
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Post by pirox_2012 3/24/2010, 6:07 pm

Aww, thanks!
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Post by Puckspaw 3/24/2010, 6:11 pm

They are sad, but still really good. nod
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Post by pirox_2012 3/26/2010, 8:56 pm

thanks Smile
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/26/2010, 10:36 pm

Amazing poem, Pirox. Smile It's so sad and sweet and perfect. :3
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Post by pirox_2012 3/29/2010, 9:50 pm

Thanks.
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