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Post by Hahaha818 4/12/2010, 5:45 pm

I cried out to the LORD
It was He who set me free
He forgave me of my sin
My sin was binding me

He pushed away the evil
I was surrounded by
I was set free from all those things
The LORD had heard my cries

He pulled me away
From the clutches of death
I thought I was unsavable
There wasn't much good left

I was feeling so much hurt
I was feeling so much pain
But I realized that those things
Were meant to be my chains

I cried out to the LORD
It was He who set me free
He forgave me of my sin
My sin was binding me

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Post by shadowsowner888 4/12/2010, 10:02 pm

Such a lovely ending! ^^ (Either of them. cheesy) I like it.
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Post by Puckspaw 4/13/2010, 7:07 pm

Great job, Lyss! nod
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