Free Falling
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Free Falling
I fear that I'm gone
Gone forever
In your warm embrace
We're together
I love you
You should see it
I think you do
But you won't admit it
Why won't you fall?
It's a good feeling
It might break your heart
But it's worth healing
I promise to
Love you with all my heart
From the end
Back to the start
So fall with me
We'll be together
This'll be amazing
Our endeavor
- - - - - - -
This was a song, actually, but I couldn't really figure out how to get the beat through the screen. x3 I might record me singing it though. :3
-rai
Gone forever
In your warm embrace
We're together
I love you
You should see it
I think you do
But you won't admit it
Why won't you fall?
It's a good feeling
It might break your heart
But it's worth healing
I promise to
Love you with all my heart
From the end
Back to the start
So fall with me
We'll be together
This'll be amazing
Our endeavor
- - - - - - -
This was a song, actually, but I couldn't really figure out how to get the beat through the screen. x3 I might record me singing it though. :3
-rai
Last edited by Rai on 7/2/2010, 5:31 pm; edited 1 time in total
Rai- Novella Composer
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Re: Free Falling
I found the beat! :3 I can sing it my head, and it sounds lovely. ^^ I love how your rhyme isn't forced, it just flows wonderfully. (:
Re: Free Falling
Yay! :3
Awe, thank you! Your poetry is so much better than mine, though! x3
Awe, thank you! Your poetry is so much better than mine, though! x3
Rai- Novella Composer
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Re: Free Falling
Great job! I could practically hear the song when i read it
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