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Post by Rai 6/30/2010, 4:13 pm

I fear that I'm gone
Gone forever
In your warm embrace
We're together

I love you
You should see it
I think you do
But you won't admit it

Why won't you fall?
It's a good feeling
It might break your heart
But it's worth healing

I promise to
Love you with all my heart
From the end
Back to the start

So fall with me
We'll be together
This'll be amazing
Our endeavor



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This was a song, actually, but I couldn't really figure out how to get the beat through the screen. x3 I might record me singing it though. :3





-rai











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Post by Puckspaw 7/2/2010, 4:21 pm

Great job, Rai! nod
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Post by Rai 7/2/2010, 5:31 pm

Thanks! Very Happy
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 7/3/2010, 4:19 pm

I found the beat! :3 I can sing it my head, and it sounds lovely. ^^ I love how your rhyme isn't forced, it just flows wonderfully. (:
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Post by Rai 7/6/2010, 4:16 pm

Yay! :3
Awe, thank you! Your poetry is so much better than mine, though! x3
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Post by conich 7/7/2010, 2:19 am

Great job! I could practically hear the song when i read it Very Happy
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Post by Rai 7/7/2010, 11:21 am

Thanks, Mandy! Very Happy
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