pain you've caused me

This night
you have torn me
Between the love I feel for you
And the hate you have created

Uncaring you broke my heart
Unknowing of the demoon that dwells with in

Not enough
apologies can't mend the pain
that has created this rift inside of me
every word making the hole bigger

unloyal you'll regret you ever cheated on me
unforgiving I will not forget this

Breaking now
Pieces falling off
The sharp edges drawing blood
can't pull myself back together

Unable to carry out my revenge
Unfeeling forgotten what i'm supposed to feel

ok this is my first real poem so tell me what you think

As said before in the PM, I love it, Hyro! ^w^

Thanks It didn't turn out too bad although the last part could have been touched up but i wanted it on here tonight

This is such a lovely poem. <3

Thank you Ave

:3 I love it, Hyro. The imagery is wonderful.

Aw, this is so sad. But it's also lovely. I adore it <3

Thanks I'm actually surprised at how well it turned out