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Bring Me To Where You Are

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Post by SaddleClub 5/14/2010, 10:50 pm

Every night I sit in bed
Wishing on a star
I pray that I can see you soon
Bring me to where you are

As I drift off into sleep
From my eyes lonely tears stream
Then I see you in front of me
Yet it is just a dream

Awoken in the quiet dawn
The gentle morning light
Streaming through the window
I draw the covers tight

Why can't I be with you?
Why can't you just see
That I know right where you belong
And it is here with me?

I take a walk around the block
Trying to clear my mind
Hoping there is something new
Something for me to find

Then I see you in front of me
Though I'm filled with confusion
I run up close only to find
You were just an illusion

I haven't seen you in so long
And my heart always aches
I need to find you, wherever you are
No matter what it takes

Every night I sit in bed
Wishing on a star
I pray that I can see you soon
Bring me to where you are
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Post by shadowsowner888 5/15/2010, 7:49 am

Aww, Saddle, great job. :3
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Post by MusicWritingLove 5/15/2010, 7:53 am

Wow!~

That was lovely! So like Vanilla Twilight... <3
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Post by SaddleClub 5/15/2010, 7:31 pm

Thank you both Smile
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Post by LuckyPenny666 5/16/2010, 3:33 pm

Great job, Saddle. Smile
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Post by SaddleClub 5/16/2010, 9:05 pm

Thanks Smile
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Post by Novastare 5/16/2010, 9:21 pm

Wow Saddle, beautiful! Great poem! Razz
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Post by SaddleClub 5/16/2010, 9:21 pm

Thank you Smile
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Post by Avé 5/16/2010, 11:22 pm

I agree with Ellie, this reminds me of Vanilla Twilight. It's so beautiful, Saddle. <3
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Post by SaddleClub 5/17/2010, 12:01 am

Thanks, Ave Smile

I'm so happy people are comparing my poem to an Owl City song Smile
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