||.:Dead Without You:.||
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||.:Dead Without You:.||
by Crystal Aura 5/24/2010, 6:45 pm
Like the exploding of a star,
You’ve changed me in and out,
Your light will travel with me far,
Past when all other lights go out
What will happen to this bond?
Will we reunite to find
that this special tie is gone?
The air was a crisp cool feeling that would attack your arm
as it hung out the window
Laughter and music
had filled the car up with no worries to even think about anymore
I wonder if you thought of me as you left,
Because all the while my eyes were wet
And I will never forget
When you said farewell, and let me go;
went ahead and shattered every vow
all the future can bestow
will be welcome now!
We cannot reverse the one-way flow of time,
Here I am, stuck in the present, creating rhymes
There is no hope in the blue sky,
No music in the low winds blowing,
And love’s red lips are cold and dry
Spiritless hands stroke away my tears
such holy weathered hands
Oh how they do freeze
Farewell to an era done
and farewell to the era that follows
As I wait for you to come back, I transpose the glow
For sorrow
They hang from the gallows
These pale bodies
I guess I could’ve been mistaken for a zombie...
...Because the world left me behind when you have
And left me here with these stiff carcasses
Thinking I was dead
Because my arms and legs were the same as empty hoses
I’m not dead, I never was, nor will I ever be
I don’t honestly think life’s a tragedy
But what do I know?
I’m waiting for you to come back...
‘Cause on the brink of death, or not
I couldn’t start living, once again, not without you...
Hoping you haven’t forgot
It is not about the length of life, but the depth of life
Length is pain to me, anyways
I’m tired of hoping
Let me die in strife
To escape your lies
You’ve changed me in and out,
Your light will travel with me far,
Past when all other lights go out
What will happen to this bond?
Will we reunite to find
that this special tie is gone?
The air was a crisp cool feeling that would attack your arm
as it hung out the window
Laughter and music
had filled the car up with no worries to even think about anymore
I wonder if you thought of me as you left,
Because all the while my eyes were wet
And I will never forget
When you said farewell, and let me go;
went ahead and shattered every vow
all the future can bestow
will be welcome now!
We cannot reverse the one-way flow of time,
Here I am, stuck in the present, creating rhymes
There is no hope in the blue sky,
No music in the low winds blowing,
And love’s red lips are cold and dry
Spiritless hands stroke away my tears
such holy weathered hands
Oh how they do freeze
Farewell to an era done
and farewell to the era that follows
As I wait for you to come back, I transpose the glow
For sorrow
They hang from the gallows
These pale bodies
I guess I could’ve been mistaken for a zombie...
...Because the world left me behind when you have
And left me here with these stiff carcasses
Thinking I was dead
Because my arms and legs were the same as empty hoses
I’m not dead, I never was, nor will I ever be
I don’t honestly think life’s a tragedy
But what do I know?
I’m waiting for you to come back...
‘Cause on the brink of death, or not
I couldn’t start living, once again, not without you...
Hoping you haven’t forgot
It is not about the length of life, but the depth of life
Length is pain to me, anyways
I’m tired of hoping
Let me die in strife
To escape your lies
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Re: ||.:Dead Without You:.||
by shadowsowner888 5/24/2010, 7:55 pm
Wonderful job, Crystal! x3 This actually feels like it would make a good song. 
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Re: ||.:Dead Without You:.||
by Crystal Aura 5/24/2010, 8:03 pm
That is a brilliant idea, Shad! O_o
I just noticed! OMG!
If I invent some cool melodic line and find a way to sing it all, it oughta be cool. Perhaps rearrange it so there's a chorus, and stuff. My parents are planning on buying me a piano, someday soon. I can't wait! :3
Thank you, Shad! *throws confetti everywhere*
Oops. *brushes confetti off Shad* Dun' kill me. X__X
I'm still just walking on air, y'know, still taking in the banquet of excellence that is your suggestion. Teehee... Hee-hee... heeeeee...
I just noticed! OMG!
If I invent some cool melodic line and find a way to sing it all, it oughta be cool. Perhaps rearrange it so there's a chorus, and stuff. My parents are planning on buying me a piano, someday soon. I can't wait! :3
Thank you, Shad! *throws confetti everywhere*
Oops. *brushes confetti off Shad* Dun' kill me. X__X
I'm still just walking on air, y'know, still taking in the banquet of excellence that is your suggestion. Teehee... Hee-hee... heeeeee...
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Re: ||.:Dead Without You:.||
by shadowsowner888 5/24/2010, 11:00 pm
Lol, I'm glad you like the idea! You should so make a video of you singing it, once you figure out the tune and music and stuff!
You should so make a video of you singing it, once you figure out the tune and music and stuff!
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Re: ||.:Dead Without You:.||
by Crystal Aura 5/25/2010, 3:22 pm
If you insist. (I remember all of the rules when doing that and stuff, so don't worry. (I know I'm not allowed to show my face, ect...)) 
Maybe it could go like this; (I could work with this. xD)
Maybe it could go like this; (I could work with this. xD)
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Re: ||.:Dead Without You:.||
by Crystal Aura 5/25/2010, 5:15 pm
I can't wait to get the song done! (Things are still getting chalked up in my head, for now. But, one day in the near future... )
)
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Re: ||.:Dead Without You:.||
by Komoda 5/25/2010, 11:21 pm
Wow, this is beautiful, Tal! ^^ I agree with Ado; it would make a lovely song. I can't wait to hear it if/once you record it. :3
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by shadowsowner888 5/26/2010, 9:10 pm
Oooh, I do like that piano tune! x3 That would be utterly amazing.
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