Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Alex only paid attention to the murderer's name. "Hee hee, he's asian!" she giggled.

That would so be me. XD Except, idk why exactly Alex is reacting that way . . . I'd be doing that just because I think Asians are that awesome, though, and things I find epic always make me laugh.

Anywho. Great chapter! :3 I love the bit about the bus and the dragons and stuff and how the bus was 'anticlimactic.' xD

Because she's aimmature xD She thought they'd be fighting dragons, for God's sake. This chapter just kind of revealed Alex's inner child...

Wow, great job! I was just gonna read the first chapter tonight, but then I couldn't stop and I read it all. And then I searched the comments just to make sure I hadn't missed anything =D. I feel lame.

Anyway, awesome story! Can't wait to read more!

Puck, you are not lame! xD Thanks for reading, I really apprecitae it.

This is such an awesome story! I can't wait to read more!

WOW! I loveee this story!


I thought I would check it out since you have been reading my story and I was pleasantly surprised! I can't wait to know what happens next!

Thanks so much Haha and Grace! = D

The Newms wrote:Puck, you are not lame! xD Thanks for reading, I really apprecitae it.

Lol you're welcome(:

Bumbadabadabadabadabada (<----- Thats a drumroll)
Chapter Six! Booyah.

Oh my gosh. XD I love the bit in the middle when she sees the car coming, and suddenly she's in the hospital. The transitioning was, like, perfect.

And the part about her humerus was humorous. Just because of the word humerus. xD And then, who couldn't help but love the part about Cup o Joe? :3

But my favorite part was the very last sentence. 8D Poor, poor Alex.

I love this.

You must write more. :3

Interesting twist... the murderer hit her with his car.
And now he is going to have her in his car! O.o

Thanks so much, guys! = D

I'm starting to like this story a lot more now (partially since I came up with a new solution to the murder...xP) so expect a new chapter soon!

And glad you like the name, Shadow, I was going to name the coffee shop after the name of some cafe my friend took me to, but I couldn't remember the name for the life of me so I just made one up xD

vonderful, very vunderful! cant vait to vead more!!! (i dont really know what up with that weird accent...)

HAHAHAHA xD I enjoyed the accent very much. Thanks, conich!

Eet hath been updated.

*-* You edited the front eight times! How magical!

But, um, regardless. xDD That was a wonderful chapter! The details made it seem really real . . . like, geez, I wouldn't have thought to put in those gold letters or any sort of creative watch. And I can't wait to find out what's happening with this Karl dude.

xD Thanks! ....I still don't know why I name him that....I think I just hit some random letters on my keyboard and though 'Hey, that looks like a name.'

This is such a goot story! Gosh I love this!
The details were so fantastic, it seemed almost real.

Wonderful chapter, can't wait to read more!

Ahhh, thank you Grace! ^.^

Whoa, that chapter was freaky. 0.o

Good job, again. :3

Chapter seven was awesome! I can't wait to read more!

Thanks so much guys! = D I really appreciate everyone reading my story!

Awesome Newms! I love the new chapter!

Yayyy, thank you conich! (And sorry for my late reply Dx)