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Post by xSophiexx16 6/13/2010, 2:06 am

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We're all crazy, all lazy-
We get mad, we get sad-
There's no denying- or lying.
that we're crazy, and lazy.
And we get mad and get sad.

We all let out sighs- all of us tell lies.
Sometimes, we need to be sung lullabies.
There's no denying- that when we're crying.
We need to be sung lullabies-
because we can't sleep with the guilt of our lies.

We all get happy- all get sappy,
Wish for dances, and romances.
And it's true we all have chances
for romances, and those dances
as we all get sappy, very happy.

We all lust for more- and over it start war,
Protest against settling for less, instead make a mess.
We can't communicate, can't ruminate
as we're lusting for more, and starting war.
As we make a mess, unable to settle for less.

We all live and die, and we all try-
try to live forever, find the Land of Never.
We all have some fear of death, or instinct to live on,
'Cause none of us wish to be forever gone.
So we all try to find the Land of Never-
and try to live forever.


Sort of an odd format, isn't it?
I tried to play around with the formats and quite liked it, how it repeated itself, but worked together in some way... Actually, it may not work at all- but at least it does in my mind, which is enough to satisfy me. So, there it is. Hope you enjoyed reading it and don't consider it a waste of time. Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/13/2010, 8:48 pm

I like it, Soph! applause Your poetry is always cool.
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Post by Avé 6/14/2010, 5:24 am

Ooh, I do like the format! This one is awesome, Sophie. ^^
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Post by xSophiexx16 6/15/2010, 12:30 am

Haha - thank you both. (: I really appreciate the comments.
This is my first attempt at entering back into poetry. Very Happy
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