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Post by Johnny Gal 6/25/2010, 8:29 am

you
have the perfect way to act
the perfect way to smile
the perfect way to laugh

but i have a problem with
the 'perfect' way you act
the 'perfect' way you smile
the 'perfect' way you laugh
the way you're so fake
perfectly

Nothing can touch you,
it all just slips by
the trouble you deserve
just because of the 'perfect' way
you are 'living' you're life.

Caught cheating?
flash those pretty whites
Caught sneaking?
flip your hair and it all goes away

Wish i could have the luck
you have everyday

but they don't know behind the scenes
the way you put on a mask everyday
have to practice your personality
sit in front of the mirror and practice different smiles
and have to remember the way your new laugh goes

i understand now that i have it easy
being myself and not
acting so cheesy

because your life on the outside is perfect
perfect smile, laugh, and dress,
yes on the outside your perfect,
but on the inside you're a mess



- Johnny






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Post by Johnny Gal 6/25/2010, 8:31 am

sorry i know none of this flows but i had to get it out of my system XD lol
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Post by Komoda 6/25/2010, 5:10 pm

This is really great, Reeses! ^^ It has such a good message. I especially like the final line...

"yes on the outside your perfect,
but on the inside you're a mess"

Just wonderful. (:
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Post by Johnny Gal 6/28/2010, 9:22 am

thank you Komoda!!!
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