Hidden Crush *finished*
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Hidden Crush *finished*
Another song! XD I wrote this for my friend - it's still about real life for me, though.
Maturity: PG
Fantasy: None
I swear, this is so cliche,
But you’re a dream.
In your presence, any day,
Isn’t as real as it seems.
I suppose it sounds hokey,
But I know why it’s called a crush.
I don’t know if it’s just me,
But you make life brutal, despite the rush.
I don’t know why I can’t be more original.
But you’re my life, I’ll die without you-
Yet you can’t see I’m real!
You’re the mate of my soul.
But you don’t know, I’m too scaredly untrue
To tell. You. How. I. Feel.
CHORUS
Oh, let me tell you! Please, just listen;
I wanna tell you something ‘bout us.
I like you - like like you - as more than a friend.
Please tell me that you feel the same?
Hiding this crush for so long;
It’s made me go insane.
I wanna tell you, oh so bad,
But I’m too afraid.
(End chorus)
There’s butterflies . . .
Inside my stomach, filled with pressure.
Should I say it?
Or just keep it secretly?
I’ve hidden my true feelings for you
For so long,
I really really want you to know . . .
CHORUS
Oh, let me tell you! Please, just listen;
I wanna tell you something ‘bout us.
I like you - like like you - as more than a friend.
Please tell me that you feel the same?
Hiding this crush for so long;
It’s made me go insane.
I wanna tell you, oh so bad,
But I’m too afraid.
BRIDGE
A thousand different ways to say it play in my head.
You watch; I wonder if you read minds?
I wish you’d come right over here,
And tell me I’m amazing . . .
Then it’d be just one happy ending.
CHORUS
Oh, let me tell you! Please, just listen;
I wanna tell you somthing ‘bout us.
I like you - like like you - as more than a friend.
Please tell me that you feel the same?
Hiding this crush for so long;
It’s made me go insane.
I wanna tell you, oh so bad,
But I’m too afraid.
Maturity: PG
Fantasy: None
I swear, this is so cliche,
But you’re a dream.
In your presence, any day,
Isn’t as real as it seems.
I suppose it sounds hokey,
But I know why it’s called a crush.
I don’t know if it’s just me,
But you make life brutal, despite the rush.
I don’t know why I can’t be more original.
But you’re my life, I’ll die without you-
Yet you can’t see I’m real!
You’re the mate of my soul.
But you don’t know, I’m too scaredly untrue
To tell. You. How. I. Feel.
CHORUS
Oh, let me tell you! Please, just listen;
I wanna tell you something ‘bout us.
I like you - like like you - as more than a friend.
Please tell me that you feel the same?
Hiding this crush for so long;
It’s made me go insane.
I wanna tell you, oh so bad,
But I’m too afraid.
(End chorus)
There’s butterflies . . .
Inside my stomach, filled with pressure.
Should I say it?
Or just keep it secretly?
I’ve hidden my true feelings for you
For so long,
I really really want you to know . . .
CHORUS
Oh, let me tell you! Please, just listen;
I wanna tell you something ‘bout us.
I like you - like like you - as more than a friend.
Please tell me that you feel the same?
Hiding this crush for so long;
It’s made me go insane.
I wanna tell you, oh so bad,
But I’m too afraid.
BRIDGE
A thousand different ways to say it play in my head.
You watch; I wonder if you read minds?
I wish you’d come right over here,
And tell me I’m amazing . . .
Then it’d be just one happy ending.
CHORUS
Oh, let me tell you! Please, just listen;
I wanna tell you somthing ‘bout us.
I like you - like like you - as more than a friend.
Please tell me that you feel the same?
Hiding this crush for so long;
It’s made me go insane.
I wanna tell you, oh so bad,
But I’m too afraid.
Re: Hidden Crush *finished*
This is the poem of my life *sigh* very well written, I love your poetry, you have such interesting "lyrics." Please keep on writing!!!
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Re: Hidden Crush *finished*
nice, shad.
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swelcome.
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song of my life. -sighs-
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Sweet! =3 (I mean, that you can relate. XD I was told before that "a lot of people would be able to relate to my songs," so now I notice this stuff.)
Re: Hidden Crush *finished*
Shadow, c'mon. Is there anything you can't do? Really? I'm so jealous of your creative talent. I can't write for... sugar.
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Who'd want to?
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I can relate to this....good job, Shadow.
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Akeria wrote:Shadow, c'mon. Is there anything you can't do? Really? I'm so jealous of your creative talent. I can't write for... sugar.
=3 You makes me feel special, lol.
SaddleClub wrote:I can relate to this....good job, Shadow.
Yay! Thanks, lol.
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Sw--uh, I mean, you're very welcome!!
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Okay. SWELCOME!!!!
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I love saying 'swelcome'.
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Hey, it's an awesome word!!
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