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Wow, Thanks! Very helpful!

Wow. Can I just say that I read the entire thing? It was so good!

Keri, I think you can say that, seeing as you just did....xD

Anyhoozle, you're welcome Grace! = D

Well, lookie that. o.o

Akeria wrote:Wow. Can I just say that I read the entire thing? It was so good!

Thank you!

• What did you think of the overall plot?
I thought it was good, you took the regular sort of high school cliche plot and added your own twist too it, so I liked it!• What did you like/dislike about the main characters?
Not very much actually they seemed different in personality I liked how the main character WASN'T a perfect princess type girl.• Were there places where you got bored? Please explain.
Not really, I don't mind not having tons of action at all times it helps the story move along and gives us a chance to feel the story.• Any suggestions for improvement? I think you could have told us a little more about the characters not just what they looked like but there personalitys.
• What did you like about the book?
I liked how the MC wasn't perfect, and how her life is very plausible. • What did you NOT like about the book?
the vps XD
• Does my story make sense?
Yep!• Is the plot compelling?
As much as a story about a high school student can be!• Does the story flow or does it seem choppy?
It has pretty good flow.• Do my Lead characters “jump off the page”?
Hmm...I don't really know what you mean by that..

Thanks for the feedback!

You need to make a sequel 0-0

I'm planning on writing one in a few months

YAY!!!!

Wow. *-*
Amazing story, moral. I see a few grammatical errors, but other than those few, the story is absolutely phenomenal. Fantastic job.

EDIT:
Oh, one thing I forgot to say! :3
It's a little hard for me to believe that they're in 7th grade... I'd imagined them as highschoolers. x3 This seems a bit more mature than 7th graders. :3

I agree with Rai... They are a little advanced to be in only 7th grade. 9th or 10th, perhaps?

Rai wrote:Wow. *-*
Amazing story, moral. I see a few grammatical errors, but other than those few, the story is absolutely phenomenal. Fantastic job.

EDIT:
Oh, one thing I forgot to say! :3
It's a little hard for me to believe that they're in 7th grade... I'd imagined them as highschoolers. x3 This seems a bit more mature than 7th graders. :3

Thank you! I really appreciate it!

& Yeah, I could see why you would think that. I have actually considered it.... xD Sad part is, stuff like that happens at my school

But it wouldn't affect the plot much, so yeah, I could change that. Thanks for the suggestion! (:

You're welcome.

Ah, I see. (:
Seriously? D8
The 7th graders at my school are kind of like that, too, but not that extreme. o.O I wish you luck at your school! Lol!

Not even kidding. xD And the teachers are worse than the students, one of our teachers always asks about gossip and then embarasses people. Or sometimes he just makes it up.
drama creating teachers ftw!

Haha, thanks. (:

Holy crap! Your teachers, too?! D:
XD

My teachers just try to embarrass us, lol!

Its kinda funny actually. xD
But it wouldn't be funny if they were spreading stuff about me.... I mean, its not like, mean, they are just playing around like OH YEAH WELL I HEARD, Grace thinks so and so is hott! and stuff like that. xD

I get made fun of by one & sometimes a 2nd one of my teachers but they are just playing around

My teachers do that to!!! They think they're cool and hip by knowing who's going out with who and so on. (so not cool...) xD

Oh my god, this is the best story i've read so far! I hate girls like those VP'. Thanks for posting this story!

Thanks both of you!