The Feelings of the Weather

by Rai 7/4/2010, 9:14 pm

Rain becomes sorrow
An omen of tomorrow

Sunshine becomes too bright
Tomorrow there'll be no light

Lightning becomes painful
Tomorrow will be disdainful

Thunder becomes too quick
Tomorrow's bomb made it's final tick

Darkness becomes so enraging
Tomorrow's fights will be engaging

Your day has been ruined.
Pieces fell all around you.
Your day is what we knew.
As the worst day

of our lives.

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-rai

by **Avé** 7/4/2010, 10:04 pm

This is wonderful, Rai! :3

by Rai 7/4/2010, 10:13 pm

Thanks, Ave! Smile

I'm still editing/revising it a bit, so it'll probably be changed. I had a bit of writers block, but I thought the idea was good, so I tried to get it down as quickly as possible so I'd remember it. x3 Wow, that was a run-on sentence. o.o

by **Malicious Nightmares** 7/4/2010, 10:26 pm

Rai wrote:Thanks, Ave!
I'm still editing/revising it a bit, so it'll probably be changed. I had a bit of writers block, but I thought the idea was good, so I tried to get it down as quickly as possible so I'd remember it. x3 Wow, that was a run-on sentence. o.o

You do know that you could've just PMed it to yourself, and put it in your save box. Riiiiight? XD

But anyway, this is awesome, Kitkat. (: