And Water Washes Me Away
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And Water Washes Me Away
(( M&F Blood, betrayal. none. It's not one of my better ones, I was trying to get back into writing darker ones. I got my inspiration from the song that rhianna re-did. But the original is by a guy and it's a lot better. The song is called "Te Amo" it's so sweet, and sad. ))
Footsteps forever gliding through the waves,
Gentle touch, and my perfect serenity caves.
What's wrong, don't you love me too?
Don't you want to be with me, as I want to be with you?
Was our kiss plastic, simply a cover?
Secret killer, or are you my lover?
I saw the tears in his eyes, fall upon the shore,
"I'm sorry baby, but we're over"
I hear his voice, as I feel him touch my heart,
My heart dodges, my veins spread apart.
The knife cuts deep, but not as deep as his voice,
But wasn't this my fate, was it not my choice?
The water washes over my blood,
I look up, at what I thought was my love.
My knees hit the ground first, staining the sand,
I slowly die, my head, and then my sweet hand.
I reach, feeling death whisper in my ear,
Help me my love, help me my dear.
I see his shadow fade away, just as me,
My body washed out, into the sea.
Footsteps forever gliding through the waves,
Gentle touch, and my perfect serenity caves.
What's wrong, don't you love me too?
Don't you want to be with me, as I want to be with you?
Was our kiss plastic, simply a cover?
Secret killer, or are you my lover?
I saw the tears in his eyes, fall upon the shore,
"I'm sorry baby, but we're over"
I hear his voice, as I feel him touch my heart,
My heart dodges, my veins spread apart.
The knife cuts deep, but not as deep as his voice,
But wasn't this my fate, was it not my choice?
The water washes over my blood,
I look up, at what I thought was my love.
My knees hit the ground first, staining the sand,
I slowly die, my head, and then my sweet hand.
I reach, feeling death whisper in my ear,
Help me my love, help me my dear.
I see his shadow fade away, just as me,
My body washed out, into the sea.
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Re: And Water Washes Me Away
Beautiful. Very descriptive, i can practically see the scene in my head!
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Re: And Water Washes Me Away
Oh, this is so beautiful, Nova. Simply amazing. ♥
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Thanks you so much, Mandy! I didn't think it was going to work.
Thanks Ave! <3
Thanks Ave! <3
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again, i love it. your poems are so amazing i love them! *stalks*
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Lol, your so awesome Madder, thanks! *Gets Stalker Spray* Just two feet away please..... Lol, Yay!! I haves stalker!
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