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Our Love Was Our Mistake.

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Post by Rai 7/21/2010, 7:17 pm

Maturity: Eh, medium? It's about a guy apologizing to a girl that he was in a relationship with, that he really screwed up with.
Fantasy: Definitely could happen.



Our Love Was Our Mistake. Letter-writing
((♥ur L♥vé Was ♥ur Mistaké))





I miss your cherry-lipstick smile.
It seems I haven't seen it for a while.
You're the one I miss the most.
You left me, but I gave up our love, we were so close.

You seem 'in the dark', you seem confused.
You were the only one, I was seduced,
By your eyes, and by your hair.
I seem to see you everywhere.

It's not right to be away from you; it's like children with no cries.
Because to me, you're a treasure, such a prize.
I love you more than I could ever express.
But, I'm sure, that's something you already have guessed.

I miss your brown hair with eyes to match.
You're the one for me, you have the key to the hatch.
Without you, I'm like a July without August to follow.
'Without you' are some words that I can't seem to swallow.

Your eyes were like stars, you're smile like the moon.
Those are the things that I want to see soon.
Do you remember when I told you I hadn't cared?
I know that's because I was only scared.

I was scared of you, scared of your heart.
I didn't know where to stop, and when to start.
You were confusing, like a hot December day.
You taught me how to live and what to say.

The feeling when your lips touched mine;
That would send shivers right down my spine.
Oddly enough, I miss that feeling.
The absence of that is what prevents my heart from healing.

But, it wouldn't be broken in the first place.
If I hadn't given up on us, the thing I cannot replace.
Even though I miss you more than enough,
I still have managed to come off as tough.

But that's not the whole picture, it's not the full painting.
Because even when it's sunny, inside I am raining.
Darling, I know I can't ask for you back.
Because I know I couldn't give you enough love, not something that I lack.

But every time I see you, see your face.
I seem to remember your embrace.
The feeling of warmth, the intimacy.
Like I said before, the hatch to my heart; you own that key.

Our love is something that cannot be forgotten.
It was so ripe, but now it is rotten.
I feel as if I could grow something new.
But my love seems to be littered by a taboo.

I want you to know that I miss you.
And I wish that I could go back, our love to renew.
So, while I sit here and contemplate.
I want you to know to not make the same mistake.




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Post by Love Is Dead 7/21/2010, 8:47 pm

Thats really good, Rai!!! :DDD
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Post by Rai 7/22/2010, 9:17 am

Thank you!
I still had yet to proof-read it when you posted, so sorry for the mistakes. xP I totally screwed up the beginning. >.<
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