Let Me Love You
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Let Me Love You
Inspired by the song Let Me Love You by Josh Wilson
Why don't you let me love you?
You pretend that it's all okay
But I hear sorrow in your voice
With every word that you say
Why don't you let me love you?
You smile, but the smile's so fake
You laugh a hollow laugh
Because underneath your heart aches
Why don't you let me love you?
You're so afraid to tell the truth
To say what you really mean
Afraid that they won't like you
Why don't you let me love you?
You're afraid to show who you are
So afriad that they will run
When they see all your scars
Why don't you let me love you?
You don't have to prove a thing
You don't have to put on a show
Just be who you want to be
Why don't you let me love you?
You don't have to reach that far
You don't have to run and hide
I'll meet you where you are
Why don't you let me love you?
You pretend that it's all okay
But I hear sorrow in your voice
With every word that you say
Why don't you let me love you?
You smile, but the smile's so fake
You laugh a hollow laugh
Because underneath your heart aches
Why don't you let me love you?
You're so afraid to tell the truth
To say what you really mean
Afraid that they won't like you
Why don't you let me love you?
You're afraid to show who you are
So afriad that they will run
When they see all your scars
Why don't you let me love you?
You don't have to prove a thing
You don't have to put on a show
Just be who you want to be
Why don't you let me love you?
You don't have to reach that far
You don't have to run and hide
I'll meet you where you are
Puckspaw- Novelette Scribe
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Re: Let Me Love You
I can totally relate to this. It's almost exactly what my best friend needs to hear right now... what I need to say to her, really. Very good job!
Nightowl- Novella Composer
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Re: Let Me Love You
Wow, this is absolutely stunning, Puck. I always love reading your poems, and I think this is one of your best.
FOREIGN?!- Novel Creator
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Re: Let Me Love You
Aww. :3 Purely magnificent, Puck! I love how all your poems have the repeating of lines. It just adds the perfect impact.
Re: Let Me Love You
Thanks guys!! =D
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