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Post by Malicious Nightmares 4/18/2010, 8:14 pm

Cursed by the pain,
Ashes are all that remain,
Never to be seen when washed by the rain.

Inside of me,
There once was a heart you could see.

Reality is now a lie,
Erased by thoughts that we deny.
All this time I wondered why,
Listening to you was even worth a try.
Leaving me there to cry,
You did nothing as I began to die.

Beleive in what once was right,
Eliminate the fact that we'll never see night.

Life has left me with wounds that won't heal,
One from the pain I always feel.
Venomous and unable to reveal,
Even this relationship was one to conceal.
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Post by Avé 4/18/2010, 8:18 pm

I know I've already told you this, but this one is really awesome, Mia. Very Happy
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 4/18/2010, 8:22 pm

Thanks alot, Ave. smiley
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Post by Komoda 4/18/2010, 8:28 pm

Wow, amazing job, Afi! ^^
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 4/18/2010, 8:29 pm

Tanku, Mo! grin
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/19/2010, 3:06 pm

Great job, Mia! ^^ I really love the opening stanza.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 4/19/2010, 3:45 pm

Me too! cheesy

Thanks, Shad. XD
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Post by Crystal Aura 4/21/2010, 4:00 pm

Outstanding. smiley
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 4/21/2010, 4:23 pm

I know. 'Tis not my kind of poems. XP I just made it for the T X L PRP. XD
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