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~Anything I would be, my love.

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Post by Novastare 7/21/2010, 11:04 pm

((M&F Low, love. Nothing. ))


I'd be second, just for you,
Anything you wanted, I would do.
Wait till heaven, beckoned my name,
Not caring rather you would, do the same.
And in love their is victory, but only through pain,
And after forgiveness, their always comes shame.
So in the darkness, let me be your light,
And even in daytime, sometimes their's night.


Let me be the light, only for you,
Not caring rather my dreams, ever come true.
And in loyalty, make my promises keep,
Just as God, watches over his sheep.
I belong to him, so please understand,
I will only lead, when he takes my hand.
I love you, but I love him,
So my love, let me never sin.


Dreams drift into nightmares, all the time,
But stand by my side, and I will be fine.
Take my words, and take my art,
Keep my love, and keep my heart.
Lion, dear lion, you know this to be my choice,
And so I ask thee, my true side rejoice!


Pain be gone, but come back to rule,
And after the joy, shall I be a fool?
Or in love's arms, will I still grow,
Little to love, little to know.
Then I shall say, though you refuse,
I will grow in faith, whatever I choose.
For God is my light, though to you I may go,
I'm always with God, and that's all I know.



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Post by conich 7/21/2010, 11:23 pm

That is so beautiful Nova! I love the last two lines 'For God is my light, though to you I may go, I'm always with God, and that's all I know.'

This is seriously awesome! It has so much feeling in it. I also love the message in it, that you'll love them but God's always there. Truly beautiful Smile
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Post by Rai 7/22/2010, 9:13 am

Wow.
This absolutely beautiful! Amazing job, Nova... I don't really even know what to say. This poem is just too brilliant for words! Very Happy Again, lovely job!
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Post by Novastare 7/22/2010, 11:22 am

Awww! Thank you so much mandy, I was dared to write a happy love poem and I was so worried. I thought it would be just empty words and thing. I can't believe there is feeling in it, I tried, but I didn't think I was victorious. Thank you so much!

Wow, thank you so much Rai! You guys make me want to attempt more, but I'm not that great at happier poetry so I don't know.
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Post by MarielofRedwall 7/23/2010, 8:32 am

I loved the story, and I like happy stories a whole lot. Yours had loads of meaning, and kind of had a story within it (obviously:oops:). I enjoyed it, all the same.Smile
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Post by Novastare 7/24/2010, 12:48 pm

Thank you so much Mariel!
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