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Post by PugsRock 10/16/2009, 9:11 pm

Maturity: Love.
Fantasy: None. It's true.

I love you.
I hate it.
But it's true.

I know it will never be
But I can't get myself to stop
I've gotten in too deep

My hearts skips a beat when you near
Dying inside, knowing you don't feel it
You love her, she's much better

I love you so much
Tears roll down my cheeks
Hearing your name

You caused me tragedy
Why did I fall in love?
It's too much for me

I'm just a little girl
Undeserving of your life
You're too good for my world

Why do I try?

I love hearing your laugh
Seeing your smile
Listening to your voice

You're amazing, wonderful
You blow my mind
You're the best guy I could find

My heart melted the day I met you
My eyes were stuck to you with glue
Couldn't focus, couldn't think
Stared at you and didn't blink

I love you
You don't love me
Can't handle the truth
Why did you do this to me?

Yeah, it's true. You can guess who it's about. Have fun.


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Post by littletoes101 10/16/2009, 9:17 pm

Hey, sounds like me and a boy I know. I love this poem!
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Post by PugsRock 10/16/2009, 9:35 pm

Aw, thanks. Smile
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Post by littletoes101 10/16/2009, 9:36 pm

Youre welcome.
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Post by rattyjol 10/16/2009, 10:09 pm

Aw... I'm sorry, Pugs. Good poem, though. Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 10/17/2009, 9:51 am

Awww. Sad *huggles Pugs* I'm sorry. Really good poem, though!
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Post by Mandy-Love 10/17/2009, 11:58 am

OMG. So awesome. Really meaningful too. Cool.
Sounds like me and another guy... sort of at least. Smile
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 10/17/2009, 2:18 pm

Oh my gosh Sad Crying or Very sad Pugs this is so sad! I feel the same way, though, but in different parts its not the same with me. Its a well written poem, but it still makes me sad Sad
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Post by PugsRock 10/17/2009, 7:19 pm

rattyjol wrote:Aw... I'm sorry, Pugs. Good poem, though. Smile

It's okay. Thanks. Smile

shadowsowner888 wrote:Awww. Sad *huggles Pugs* I'm sorry. Really good poem, though!

Thanks. It took me less than 5 minutes to write... it just came to me.

MandyGurl33 wrote:OMG. So awesome. Really meaningful too. Cool.
Sounds like me and another guy... sort of at least. Smile

Aw, it does? Sad I'm sorry.
Thanks, though.

amazon wrote:Oh my gosh Sad Crying or Very sad Pugs this is so sad! I feel the same way, though, but in different parts its not the same with me. Its a well written poem, but it still makes me sad Sad

Aw, I'm sorry I made you sad. Sad
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/6/2009, 4:55 pm

PugsRock wrote:

amazon wrote:Oh my gosh Sad Crying or Very sad Pugs this is so sad! I feel the same way, though, but in different parts its not the same with me. Its a well written poem, but it still makes me sad Sad

Aw, I'm sorry I made you sad. Sad

Oh no, its fine Smile I am glad that you expressed yourself and I am sorry you feel this way.
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Post by SaddleClub 11/6/2009, 5:13 pm

Awww. Sad Good poem, but sad.
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/22/2009, 2:25 am

Ah, that is brilliant. It's so sad, and it reminds me of me xD So I love it x]
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