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Post by Avé 2/15/2010, 3:49 pm




it's not that I like seeing you sad
DEPRESSION
is merely a trend, don't you see?

"Behind every tear lies a story untold
Greater than that of a million raindrops"

but all you've ever wanted is
ATTENTION
the light refuses to shine on me

"With every one comes a feeling so cold,
Though pleasure nor pain will convince it to stop"

easier to ask for forgiveness than
PERMISSION
say you're sorry & i'll know it's a lie

"It hurts to cry, if not more than to live
This lie that you have been; a secret from yourself, dear"

trust me, I do love you more than anything
DID I MENTION?
darling, I really do just love to see you cry


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Post by LE COCO VOUS AIME 2/15/2010, 4:10 pm

As always that was beautiful Ave! I've missed reading your poems!
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/15/2010, 6:26 pm

OHH, I get it, it's like two poems put together. I get it. xD

Supa supa supa lovely. Very Happy I remember you telling me about this one, I think.
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/15/2010, 10:40 pm

easier to ask for forgiveness than
PERMISSION

It's Eragon! Very Happy It's Eragon!

*cough* rolleyes

Epic. x3 Amazing formatting and amazing words.
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Post by Akeria 2/15/2010, 10:53 pm

I really like this. The formatting definitely makes it stand out.
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Post by Avé 2/16/2010, 4:51 pm

xD Danke. Smile
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/16/2010, 5:32 pm

shadowsowner888 wrote:
easier to ask for forgiveness than
PERMISSION

It's Eragon! :D It's Eragon!

*cough* :(::

Epic. x3 Amazing formatting and amazing words.

Oh yeah! It is! o:

I knew I'd heard that in a movie before. xD
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Post by Avé 2/16/2010, 5:50 pm

I think I read it online, somewhere, I've always loved the quote. But now I know it's from Eragon, yay. :3
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/16/2010, 6:08 pm

It is, like, a famous quote, but it's also from Eragon. xD
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Post by Avé 2/16/2010, 8:00 pm

Right. I knew that.

xD
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 3/8/2010, 5:54 pm

Beautiful to look at and read xD I lurves it :3
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Post by Novastare 3/8/2010, 8:50 pm

Wow, that was beautiful. :O Great job, did you do both of the poems?
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Post by Avé 3/9/2010, 6:59 pm

Gracias. Smile

And yes, Nova, I did. nod
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Post by Novastare 3/10/2010, 2:04 pm

Wow, thats so cool!
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Post by Mordor 3/13/2010, 4:56 pm

This is really good, Ave Very Happy
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Post by Erinbeth 3/24/2010, 2:11 pm

Oh I adore the formatting! Wow like always great job, it was totally Fan-tabulous....xD
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Post by Avé 3/24/2010, 10:18 pm

Thanks! Very Happy
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