Angel
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Angel
by DreamCatcher81 8/14/2009, 11:13 pm
Maturity: Sinning
Fantasy: Nothing
This is based on something I learned about at Church Camp. It's in Revelation!
Angel
He sits and waits for the signal
Through the warm and through the cool.
He is bound by honor.
In that duty he will never falter.
Invisible to human eyes
No one can see his ties
That are holding him back.
Patience he will never lack.
The world moves on around him.
He waits without a whim.
He sees all their sin.
All the children, men, and women.
But they don’t know he’s there.
They act without a care.
Disregarding their punishment.
Not knowing that he’s been sent.
So he sits and waits for the signal
Through the warm and through the cool.
He is bound by honor.
In that duty he will never falter.
His Master sits above in dismay
As they continually disobey.
Day and night
They scream and fight.
So He gives the signal with despair
And the angel rises to the air.
After all these years of unmoving
Now it’s his time to do his duty.
Fantasy: Nothing
This is based on something I learned about at Church Camp. It's in Revelation!
Angel
He sits and waits for the signal
Through the warm and through the cool.
He is bound by honor.
In that duty he will never falter.
Invisible to human eyes
No one can see his ties
That are holding him back.
Patience he will never lack.
The world moves on around him.
He waits without a whim.
He sees all their sin.
All the children, men, and women.
But they don’t know he’s there.
They act without a care.
Disregarding their punishment.
Not knowing that he’s been sent.
So he sits and waits for the signal
Through the warm and through the cool.
He is bound by honor.
In that duty he will never falter.
His Master sits above in dismay
As they continually disobey.
Day and night
They scream and fight.
So He gives the signal with despair
And the angel rises to the air.
After all these years of unmoving
Now it’s his time to do his duty.
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Re: Angel
by Komoda 8/15/2009, 1:08 am
Ooh, I like this one, Dream! It's really mysterious.
Oh... Revelation. I learned quite a bit about that.
Oh... Revelation. I learned quite a bit about that.
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Re: Angel
by DreamCatcher81 8/15/2009, 1:23 am
Thanks!
I know! I used to actually be afraid of it but now I love it! Lol! Have you read about his throneroom! It's so cool and whenever we pray, our spirits go up to the throneroom!
I know! I used to actually be afraid of it but now I love it! Lol! Have you read about his throneroom! It's so cool and whenever we pray, our spirits go up to the throneroom!
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Re: Angel
by itachiphan8823 8/15/2009, 1:29 am
That's a really good, well-written poem. I loved it. 
You get 3 cheers for that one! LOL!
You get 3 cheers for that one! LOL!Last edited by itachiphan8823 on 8/15/2009, 1:35 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Grammar Errors! Again!)
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Re: Angel
by DreamCatcher81 8/15/2009, 1:31 am
Thanks!
Whoot! Go 3 cheers! Lol! You get 3 cheers back! Lol!
Whoot! Go 3 cheers! Lol! You get 3 cheers back!
Lol!
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Re: Angel
by DreamCatcher81 12/24/2009, 1:04 am
Thanks Ratty! Wait, what did I call you on WI? It was so long, I'm trying to remember. I think it was like SSNPOA. I don't know what it stands for or at least the O and A, but it sounds about right!
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Re: Angel
by rattyjol 12/24/2009, 1:17 am
Yeah, I think that was it. Hang on, lemme see if I can find an old PM about it.
Nope, nothing. Oh well.
Nope, nothing. Oh well.
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Re: Angel
by DreamCatcher81 12/25/2009, 2:04 am
I could probably find it, considering I haven't got a pm in like a year!
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