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Ninja Academy - A Naruto RP - Part 7 *Note added!*

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Post by Epileptic Lies 8/16/2009, 12:29 am

[How can you be outside if you're on the computer? o_0]
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/16/2009, 12:31 am

(She probably has a laptop. Did I guess right? You can use it with a wireless router. The laptop will pick up the signals from the wireless router, and you have to connect to it.)
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/16/2009, 12:35 am

yeah that's what i have ...comes in handy when you are by a bone fire with nothing to do ...
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Post by Epileptic Lies 8/16/2009, 12:35 am

itachiphan8823 wrote:(She probably has a laptop. Did I guess right? You can use it with a wireless router. The laptop will pick up the signals from the wireless router, and you have to connect to it.)

I guess thinking she was using a PC xD
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Post by Epileptic Lies 8/16/2009, 12:36 am

computeradmit wrote:yeah that's what i have ...comes in handy when you are by a bone fire with nothing to do ...

[So does that mean bones replace the wood? XD Sorry, I like making fun of typos]
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/16/2009, 12:37 am

I looked at her paler than ever. pale I hope she wasn't mad at me. "I didn't kill my mother," I told her. "I lied." I was looking at the ground. "I just said it was me, because I blame myself for letting it happen. "Iii....." I broke off. I couldn't say it.

(Yes! I was right! cheers Sorry, I'm having a smilie addiction today!)
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[Haha!]
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/16/2009, 12:39 am

'' so your meaning to tell me this whole dream thing is a lie ... ? '' she asked looking at him '' you don't have any kind of dreams '' she gave a dirty look ...

[ aww a lie i thought they where gona both have to fall in love or something lol ]
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/16/2009, 12:44 am

(I'm getting to it! I got the story finally worked out now! I'm so excited.)

"No, that's not it." I told her hurriedly. "I blame myself for what happened to my mother. She got killed while me and my brother were in a fight, but..." I stopped and looked at her. 'Please, don't make me say it,' I thought to myself.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/16/2009, 12:45 am

'' and what i need to know so we can fix the whole thing '' she said she could here sammie crying an that made her want to cry
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/16/2009, 12:49 am

Looks like I had to say it, "It was my brother." I started to turn red. "He wanted to take our fight to a," I did air quotations, " 'whole new level.' As he put it. He used a powerful tech and my mom tried to stop him." I started to cry tears of anger. My voice started to shake. "She got killed when he missed a hand seal. She got caught in the backlash of it. I went over to her," I started to bawl. I couldn't continue until i calmed down..
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/16/2009, 12:51 am

'' okay so why does she want revenge on you ? '' she asked looking at him
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/16/2009, 12:56 am

This calmed me down. "Let me finish first," I said. "So I... never mind. I went over to my brother next. He was still alive. He told me, 'Please help me!' I yelled at him, 'You just killed mom and all you care about is yourself!' He looked at me suprised and said, 'Well, yeah! This is my life and I don't want to die!'" I was filled with rage. I punched the couch so hard, that the legs broke on it.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/16/2009, 12:57 am

'' okay '' selena said she still was wondering how he came into play there ...
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[ this is getting good !Smile ]
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/16/2009, 1:04 am

"So you know what I did?" I said, probably sounding like a crazy person. "I kicked him in his face. Then I started punching him. I was so filled with rage, that I couldn't stop myself. Why did he have to say that about our mother?" I looked down. "So, I used his own jutsu against him. I shoved it through his chest, killing him." I looked up at her. "Now that I got the real story out. I can tell you why I think my mother is haunting us."

(I know! I'm so excited! Just one more post and the whole story is out!)


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'' okay i am ready to know '' selena said looking at him she wasn't shaking anymore sammie was still crying ...
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I thought about it for a moment, and then continued. "I lied about something else. At the bonfire...that was the first time my mother came to me." I stood there in silence. "I think she came to me, because of what I did to you." I walked up to her and said, "My mom told me before she died," tears fell down my face, "that if I ever met a girl that seemed to be 'the one,' that I should treat her like she was royalty." I started sobbing uncontrollably. "I told her, 'Ok mom, I will.' She told me, 'You better, or else you're going to have to answer to me.' I started laughing, and then..." I looked down, "She died."

(Crap! I'm going to have to finish on the next one! This was too good, I didn't want to add too much!)


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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/16/2009, 1:15 am

'' okay an are you saying i am the girl ? '' she asked nervously

[ i have to go ]
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(Alright! I'll finish the story and then we'll have to continue later!)


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Post by itachiphan8823 8/16/2009, 1:23 am

"Yes you are," I said. "But let me finish." I collected my thoughts again and continued. "I never thought that she would actually come after me. I thought that it was just some joke. Well," I said, "I'm not laughing now. She told me to treat 'the one' like royalty, and I treated her like dirt. I brought my mother's wrath upon myself. The only thing I can think of that will get rid of my mother is this." I got even closer to Selena, grabbed the back of her head and puller her into a kiss.

(And...scene! Hey you... *talks to some unknown person* bring this film to the editing room. Tell them that it's perfect, and to get it ready for mass production.) (Sorry, I don't know what got into me! ROFLOL! I'm laughing so hard that I'm crying! I need to go to sleep!)
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selena looked at him ' so if i just kiss him then that's it the whole thing will be done? ... she wonder if she would have to continue to date him ...she didn't know if she was ready for this ... but she continued to get closer to him ...
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I pulled out of the kiss. I looked into her eyes and said, "I wonder if it worked?" There was no easy way to tell, if the 'curse' was lifeted.

(I'll be right back.)


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'' do we have to stay togother or did we just have to kiss ? '' she asked looking at him ... when they pulled out of the kiss she imeditly looked down ... she could still here sammie crying ...
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I lifted her chin so she was looking at me. "I think she wanted me to tell you the truth." I stared at her trying to think of how to word it. I looked down as I said, "I'm wondering if it's also because you haven't truly forgiven me."
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