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Post by Openbook 8/19/2009, 8:55 pm

Fantasy: Hard to explain, but it is, it has vampires
Mature: Blood, and creepy

This is just ans exert so this one is finished but I might add different exerts
Before I start this is a little piece of a bigger story I am writing so It might be confusing


Silver flashed in Hope's dream. She twisted and turned unable to pull herself from the hypnotic movement. Her covers where wrapped uselessly around her legs pinning her legs down. The silver came down in one more sweeping motion reflecting off some unseen light and pain sired through her body the twisting and tuning turned to her withering in pain and the white hot pain blazed through her veins. A small tickle on her neck, like a single hair gliding down her neck.She opened her eyes finally free of the dream and instinctively put her hand to her neck and felt the warm moistener. She slowly climbed out of her bed untangling herself as she went. She walked to the bathroom not turning on any lights. Pulling a tissue from the box on the counter she pressed it against the wound on her neck absorbing the blood. She got a band aid out of the cabinet. She placed it on the wound and threw the wrapper away. Know she moved to turn on the light, know that blood didn't threaten to permanently stain her cloths. She washed her hands looking at the red as it ran down the drain. It took her some time to get the dried blood from under her finger nails and she wondered where it had come from.
Flipping some of the loose water from her fingers she dried with the eggplant purple hand towel and looked up at the the mirror, and screamed.

It wasn't a loud scream but in the silence of the night it seemed to echo through the bathroom. She knew why there was dried blood under he fingernails. On the mirror, written blood,her blood, was a message and the message read:

Death Is Permanent .



You should tell me what you think. I want to know if you like it.


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Post by twilighter3000 8/19/2009, 9:00 pm

Whoa! That was intense, keep writing! I love it!
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Post by PugsRock 8/19/2009, 9:02 pm

I agree with Danielle! But have you read the rules? You have to post the fantasy and maturity of your stories and poems.
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Post by Openbook 8/19/2009, 9:03 pm

Oh Whoops sorry I read them a while ago but I guess I forgot sorry again.
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Post by PugsRock 8/20/2009, 8:50 am

That's okay. Smile Just a reminder.
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/20/2009, 9:00 am

I like it! ;D
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