The Chronicles of Nia Cicida

Hi! I'm re-writing one of my older Webkinz Insider stories, because now that I can freely kill people [xD] in my story, I just wanted to start it all over. On WI, it was a pretty big hit, but I can't seem to get as many readers as last time. It's about a battle between darkness and light, it has dragons, and other mystical creatures-- like mermaids, et cetera. Pleeeaaase comment! xD I need feedback, realllyyyy badly.

https://shadowsowner888.forumotion.net/original-works-f4/the-chronicles-of-nia-cicida-book-1-the-light-at-the-end-of-the-tunnel-rest-of-chapter-two-added-t1141.htm#62043

Oh this is cool I got to check it out!.

Pleeassee read this, peeps! xD