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How does this sound? =) ~ Please post, I need some help! ~
Hi, all! =)
Okay, I have started a new--werewolfy!--story. It will be my first ever of its type, so I'm excited. I wrote up a summary today, and wanted to have some opinions on it. =) I don't yet have a title for it, so, if you happen to think of one, please tell me! Anyways, here's my summary...
Maverick Rollin is just an ordinary girl with a little brother
who's extremely annoying--his name is Halen, he has ADHD. On Maverick's
13th birthday, Halloween, she has the strangest dream. She's with a
pack of wolves and she's running with them. This dream happens over and
over until finally on the night before the Halloween dance (after
Halloween, lol--it got postponed! ) she dreams that she & the
wolves meet a man in the forest. He talks to them and says that she's
one of them, then turns into a wolf. One of them meaning a werewolf,
and she belongs to their pack. She freaks out when she wakes up but
later that night goes to the dance. The man is there; he chases her into
the forest. She stays at the pack for a while, until her little brother
finds her. When she goes back to school she won't tell her friends
what's wrong. Each night she Shifts and visit them; she wants to be an
normal teen, but she also wants to be a wolf--she can't choose. The
next day at school she blurts to her friends what happened. Ilyssa
& Harmony (two of her friends) freak out, but Connor (her best
friend of all time) doesn't. Connor goes to the pack with her that
night and meets the leader. He declares, after almost killing her, that
she may know about the pack. The next day at school Harmony gives
Connor and Maverick a note that says,
"We know your Secret and we're Coming for You."
Harmony
& Ilyssa's fathers are both Hunters--Hunters kill/capture
werewolves and other creatures, to sell them or to put them in cruel
things like circus shows. Maverick must make the choice on whether or
not she wants to go and help protect the pack, leaving Connor and her
family behind, or stay with her family and let the pack fend for
themselves. She decides to leave and stay with the pack. A few days later, several Hunters attack the pack. Fives wolves are killed, and six injured--including Connor. Connor had come to try and "rescue back" Maverick, but Maverick had refused.
Now, I have two endings to the story and I can't pick between the two.
Ending A) Maverick says goodbye to Connor & goes with the pack (which would leave me a good way to start a second book)
Ending B) Maverick goes back home with Connor (which would be a satisfying ending, but...what fun are they?)
Thank you before hand for posting and clicking. =)
Okay, I have started a new--werewolfy!--story. It will be my first ever of its type, so I'm excited. I wrote up a summary today, and wanted to have some opinions on it. =) I don't yet have a title for it, so, if you happen to think of one, please tell me! Anyways, here's my summary...
Maverick Rollin is just an ordinary girl with a little brother
who's extremely annoying--his name is Halen, he has ADHD. On Maverick's
13th birthday, Halloween, she has the strangest dream. She's with a
pack of wolves and she's running with them. This dream happens over and
over until finally on the night before the Halloween dance (after
Halloween, lol--it got postponed! ) she dreams that she & the
wolves meet a man in the forest. He talks to them and says that she's
one of them, then turns into a wolf. One of them meaning a werewolf,
and she belongs to their pack. She freaks out when she wakes up but
later that night goes to the dance. The man is there; he chases her into
the forest. She stays at the pack for a while, until her little brother
finds her. When she goes back to school she won't tell her friends
what's wrong. Each night she Shifts and visit them; she wants to be an
normal teen, but she also wants to be a wolf--she can't choose. The
next day at school she blurts to her friends what happened. Ilyssa
& Harmony (two of her friends) freak out, but Connor (her best
friend of all time) doesn't. Connor goes to the pack with her that
night and meets the leader. He declares, after almost killing her, that
she may know about the pack. The next day at school Harmony gives
Connor and Maverick a note that says,
"We know your Secret and we're Coming for You."
Harmony
& Ilyssa's fathers are both Hunters--Hunters kill/capture
werewolves and other creatures, to sell them or to put them in cruel
things like circus shows. Maverick must make the choice on whether or
not she wants to go and help protect the pack, leaving Connor and her
family behind, or stay with her family and let the pack fend for
themselves. She decides to leave and stay with the pack. A few days later, several Hunters attack the pack. Fives wolves are killed, and six injured--including Connor. Connor had come to try and "rescue back" Maverick, but Maverick had refused.
Now, I have two endings to the story and I can't pick between the two.
Ending A) Maverick says goodbye to Connor & goes with the pack (which would leave me a good way to start a second book)
Ending B) Maverick goes back home with Connor (which would be a satisfying ending, but...what fun are they?)
Thank you before hand for posting and clicking. =)
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Re: How does this sound? =) ~ Please post, I need some help! ~
It sounds really really good, but maaaybe you should not tell the peeps what happens in the ending? xDD
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Re: How does this sound? =) ~ Please post, I need some help! ~
I need help planning the ending, , which is why I sharing it! xD But thank you for posting. =)
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Re: How does this sound? =) ~ Please post, I need some help! ~
AAnyyyyoonnneee else? =) Please, peoples, I wanna start writing soon and I need help! =P
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Re: How does this sound? =) ~ Please post, I need some help! ~
I say you do Ending A.
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