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Post by Nightowl 10/11/2009, 11:46 pm

*edited out* I don't want this here anymore. Smile


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Post by Avé 10/12/2009, 6:15 am

WOW this is good! I love it! Nice job Very Happy
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Post by littletoes101 10/12/2009, 7:18 am

This is pretty good!
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Post by shadowsowner888 10/12/2009, 6:14 pm

That rocks. cheesy It kinda reminds me of the song Crush by David Archuleta, cus it seems to be the same kind of situation in them both. My only more negative opinion would be that it doesn't rhyme, but it's not like poetry has to rhyme. xD
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Post by Nightowl 10/17/2009, 5:07 pm

Thanks guys. Smile
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Post by rattyjol 10/17/2009, 5:32 pm

That was awesome! Very Happy
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