(For lack of a better title) Lord

by Imagine 2/14/2010, 9:05 am

Hola! My first attempt at poetry is, like, two months, so I won't be shocked if it sucks. But I love poerty-correction, I love poetic things.... my poems will not rhyme. At all.

Lord

I tried Lord,

And you know it,

Tried to be good,

Respectfull,

Joyfull,

Pure.

But you left me,

Dropped me in my sorrows

Left me to die.

Spitefully,

Sillently,

Alone.

You ripped away my loved ones,

Tearing my heart to peices,

Leaving my with the bloody shards,

Why did you,

How could you,

Turn your back on me?

I hate you!

You've ignored my screams,

My tears, my pain,

For too long!

I cried out for help...

And you weren't there.

Oh Lord, I tried,

But I failed. And you knew it.

You saw. You showed my my falts,

And I looked away.

I shouted and kicked,

But here I am.

On my knees, I pray for forgiveness.

I was blind, and now broken.

Take me back, Lord, I will be,

Respectfull.

Joyfull.

Pure.

Sorry for wasting your time with my crappy poetry! =)

by **shadowsowner888** 2/14/2010, 9:20 am

Crappy? xD No, absolutely not! This is awesome. Beautiful job.

by Imagine 2/14/2010, 9:22 am

Thanks! =D I have no idea where it came from.

by **Komoda** 2/14/2010, 10:21 am

Whoa, amazing poem! I love the descriptive words you used and even though it doesn't rhyme, it still has a good rhythm to it. nod

by Imagine 2/14/2010, 2:20 pm

Thanks! And yeah, it's more like beat poetry cept not as cool. =)

by **Avé** 2/15/2010, 2:30 pm

I absolutely love this, Alice. <3

by Imagine 2/15/2010, 2:32 pm

Aw, thanks, Ave! =)

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