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Rose Of Life And Death

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Post by Malicious Nightmares 11/11/2009, 10:33 pm

The rose of life and death,
You messed with it.
You tore it in two,
In three,
In four and in five.
You crushed it to the ground.
The rose of my life and my death.
And once torn to bits,
The life faded from it,
And so did mine.
You left it dead,
Wich left me dead.
The rose of life and death.
You chose death.
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Post by Avé 11/11/2009, 10:35 pm

That's scary... but amazing! You can take such a beautiful thing- a rose, in this case- and make it sound so deadly. Very Happy
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 11/11/2009, 10:37 pm

Tha- ank you! :3
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/11/2009, 11:31 pm

Aww! Sad Poor rose! Think of how it feels.

Lol, wonderful job as usual. grin
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 11/12/2009, 7:48 am

Tha- ank You!
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Post by Snow 11/12/2009, 9:23 am

Reading your poems is so nice. ^-^
You always write more and they're always so lovely and dramatic.
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Post by Dragon Lover 11/12/2009, 6:45 pm

What an amazing poem. =] Like Avvy said, taking something beautiful and making it deadly. I like your styyyyyle. Cool
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 11/12/2009, 7:17 pm

Thank you, DL!
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