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Post by The Mad Hatter 12/24/2009, 1:33 pm

It all started with life.

As cold as death you would know,
As thick and red the blood could flow,

It started in the midst of night
Though all it really was, was a fight

All but one knew what it would cause
Liable promises of the laws
Lovely night for a fall

Slithering slanderer of the dark
Try as you might we will not break
Although our all lives are at stake
Rebel angel tell me why
To lure us away from the light
Even though your attempt may be in vain
Do try, dear friend, to stop our plight

Without our guide we are left
In the blackness that is our sin
There, the darkness starts off as small as a pin
Here me now, and take heed

Let me speak to you right now
It is what you sow you shall reap
For even though you may weep
Every corner something may creep

As cold as death I would know,
As thick and red as my blood could flow.

It all ended with death.
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Post by wolflover96 12/24/2009, 1:36 pm

cool! It All Started With Life Icon_biggrin
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Post by PugsRock 12/24/2009, 1:47 pm

Cool! Smile Nice job.
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Post by Komoda 12/24/2009, 2:11 pm

Wow, this is amazing! I love the formatting and the poem itself is incredible! Awesome word choice, too. Very Happy
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Post by The Mad Hatter 12/24/2009, 2:54 pm

Thanks so much peeps! Very Happy
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Post by rattyjol 12/24/2009, 3:17 pm

Wow, that's awesome. Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/25/2009, 4:07 pm

Ooo, lovely job! :3 I love how the bold letters spell out the title.
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Post by Cyn431 12/26/2009, 1:21 pm

That. Was. EPIC. cheesy And very professionalistic--is that a word? If not, then it just became one, xD
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Post by The Mad Hatter 12/26/2009, 9:24 pm

Thanks you, people!
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 12/27/2009, 9:41 am

[gush]Brrr! That's creepily awesome grin I adore the bold title spelling out thingie. I love the two offset couplets at the top and bottom; very nice. And your word choice is fantastic! [/gush]
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Post by The Mad Hatter 12/27/2009, 4:26 pm

Thanks so much everyone who has commented!
I, myself, thought this was the most epic fails of all epic fails... xD]
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Post by The Mad Hatter 1/10/2010, 11:50 am

=D
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Post by Cyn431 1/10/2010, 12:38 pm

This was no epic fail. no
An epic fail would be saying you're writing a poem about pie and instead writing 3.14159265. xD
But the reality is, what I just said is an epic fail of trying to explain an epic fail. nod
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 1/10/2010, 3:18 pm

I love it! Ecspecially how it spells it out Smile
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/10/2010, 4:32 pm

COOLIO. o_O
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Post by xSophiexx16 1/11/2010, 12:57 am

Wow.
That's amazing!
Great, Great job!
You're my poem nomination for featureds.
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Post by The Mad Hatter 1/11/2010, 6:34 pm

thank you sooo much, peoples!!
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Post by The Mad Hatter 1/25/2010, 8:32 pm

thank you peopleeee!
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/26/2010, 7:15 pm

Swelcome. ^^ (Lol, whether that thank you was really for me or not, I'm still saying it. xD)
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Post by The Mad Hatter 2/2/2010, 10:04 pm

Thanks peoples who nominated/voted for this!
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Post by Akeria 2/12/2010, 5:59 pm

This is really well done.
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Post by CocoaPuff 2/13/2010, 1:40 pm

This is crazy good, really O.o, I love it!!
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