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Post by Jinx 6/27/2009, 10:00 am

Goodbye
Hearts are such fragile things.
Easily broken.
When broken,they never become fully whole.
Beating with a shattered rhythm.
Pity the girl.
It has been broken so many times.
Her heart is a lopsided,monstrous thing.
A pained animal.
And when it breaks anew-
It unravels,and along with it,all the joy she had felt.
Her life becomes a ruined tapestry.
And so it has.
Good comes,however.
Only in this anguish,may she write poetry.
So this she writes
As a goodbye.
Goodbye.


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Post by shadowsowner888 6/27/2009, 4:05 pm

Aww, that's sad. Great job!
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Post by Jinx 6/27/2009, 5:00 pm

Thank you.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/27/2009, 5:43 pm

I like it, even though it's sad. It's good.
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Post by iGrievous 6/27/2009, 8:55 pm

Good.
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Post by Kat24 6/28/2009, 9:38 am

Woah, Mea, I like it! Smile
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Post by Jinx 6/28/2009, 11:58 am

Thank you Smile
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Post by Kat24 6/28/2009, 3:21 pm

Welcomez, buddie. xD
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