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Post by Malicious Nightmares 2/16/2010, 10:05 pm

God knows,
That life must be savoured by the second.

Only I,
Beleive that is false.

Overall,
My life has been wonderful.

Darkness soon struck me,
And reminded me of the truth.

Blood will be spilled,
And my blood it is.

You even knew,
How I deserved to die.

Everyone,
Just watch me die.

Goodbye, I bid you farewell.
Goodbye to my life,
Goodbye to all I own.
Goodbye to myself,
Goodbye to the world.
Goodbye, I hope to see you soon.
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Post by Imagine 2/16/2010, 10:10 pm

Woah, that was really beautiful.=)
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 2/16/2010, 10:11 pm

Thanks. :3

I was sort of crying [I'll admit] so it got me to writing this poem... >_>
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Post by Imagine 2/16/2010, 10:12 pm

Welcomez.

The best poems are inspired by emotions.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 2/16/2010, 10:17 pm

True that. smiley
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/16/2010, 11:32 pm

I agree with Alice. nod Emotions are good for poems. Fantastic job. Smile
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 2/17/2010, 8:08 am

Thank you, Shadow. :3
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