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Post by WordsCanKill 6/8/2009, 3:01 pm

Mhm...one of my better poems...

xP

From polyvore...I made it on a set...quick copy and paste, and ta-daa, my work here is done. :3

Do hope you enjoy my lovely, depressing poem.


And those memories fade...
As the sands of time obscure them...
In a choking curtain of pain.
It washes over them...
Making them unrecognizable...
As she sits there...
Waiting for a new Prince Charming...
Like the last one...
Those last words before he took off "I still love you..."
Linger.
Salty-bitterness...
Coats her mouth with disgust every time those words come back to her...
Like a black eye...
Or dieing...
And Father Time...
Cares no more...
Like...slowing the time we kissed...
Now...it's like it's sped up...
Time waits for no one...
Has never...
And will never...
And yet...
As it flies....
And those memories fade...
I still love you. <3


*Successfully transferred from the other Writer's Guild website, AND Polyvore*
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Post by twilighter3000 6/8/2009, 3:05 pm

Aww, sad, but good! I like it!
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What's your username on Polyvore? I'm a member on there too!
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 3:07 pm

Yay! Very Happy I remember this! Still awesome.
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/8/2009, 3:10 pm

Very Happy
Thankuu everyone
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Post by Jade 6/8/2009, 10:03 pm

Wow, awesome. It has so much feeling and meaning to it, unlike some other poems I've read on other sites about cats and pizza ect (xD) Your writing style is very cool, I hope to hear more!
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Post by iGrievous 6/8/2009, 10:35 pm

It's pretty good.
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/9/2009, 5:40 pm

Thanks Blood, I usually write free-verse, as it's literally impossible for me to rhyme...

And Grievous, thanks.
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Post by Arianna 6/12/2009, 1:14 am

Wow, it's amazing Smile
I really like it!
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/12/2009, 11:46 am

Thanks.
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Post by Taquito 6/12/2009, 11:34 pm

Wow, that is awesome. Smile
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/13/2009, 7:15 pm

Thankuu
Very Happy
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Post by Akeria 6/13/2009, 9:02 pm

This is really good. Smile
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/13/2009, 9:25 pm

Thanks Akeria
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Post by Akeria 6/13/2009, 9:27 pm

You're welcome. Smile
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/13/2009, 9:36 pm

Durp durp....I might add another poem...
*hums*
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Post by iGrievous 6/13/2009, 9:39 pm

Oh, no!Oh no!
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/13/2009, 9:58 pm

Oh no Grievi?
D:
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Post by iGrievous 6/14/2009, 6:56 am

What? You're not really hurt, or anything, right?? I was playing, er. . . sorry. . .
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/14/2009, 9:02 am

Ah...what?
*is not understanding*
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Post by iGrievous 6/14/2009, 9:24 am

Never mind.
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Post by WordsCanKill 6/14/2009, 6:56 pm

Okie dokie...
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