A Walk Through Your Memories
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A Walk Through Your Memories
by Puckspaw 3/10/2010, 4:32 pm
A walk through your memories
A walk through your past
To unravel the mysteries
That you seem to cast
A walk through your memories
Let's just take a peek
Just a look, a glance
To see why you're so bleak
A walk through your memories
To see who you once were
Because who you are now
Did not just occur
A walk through your memories
So we may find the reasons
For the changes and troubles
That come like the seasons
A walk through your memories
So we can find out why
You seem so troubled, so sad
And so afraid to cry
A walk through your memories
A walk through your past
To unravel the mysteries
That you seem to cast
A walk through your past
To unravel the mysteries
That you seem to cast
A walk through your memories
Let's just take a peek
Just a look, a glance
To see why you're so bleak
A walk through your memories
To see who you once were
Because who you are now
Did not just occur
A walk through your memories
So we may find the reasons
For the changes and troubles
That come like the seasons
A walk through your memories
So we can find out why
You seem so troubled, so sad
And so afraid to cry
A walk through your memories
A walk through your past
To unravel the mysteries
That you seem to cast
Last edited by Puckspaw on 7/14/2010, 2:23 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: A Walk Through Your Memories
by Avé 3/10/2010, 5:12 pm
This is awesome, Puck! 
I love how you repeat the last stanza - it really emphasizes it.
I love how you repeat the last stanza - it really emphasizes it.
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Re: A Walk Through Your Memories
by shadowsowner888 3/10/2010, 5:59 pm
That's epic, Puck. 
I agree with Ave about the last stanza!
I agree with Ave about the last stanza!
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Re: A Walk Through Your Memories
by FOREIGN?! 3/11/2010, 9:56 am
Great poem, Puck! I hafta agree with Shadow and Ave, the last stanza is really awesome. 
I hafta agree with Shadow and Ave, the last stanza is really awesome. 
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Re: A Walk Through Your Memories
by Puckspaw 7/14/2010, 2:24 pm
Thanks, Forrey. Lol I know it's a little late. :/
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Re: A Walk Through Your Memories
by Rai 7/14/2010, 3:54 pm
Wow, this is really amazing. I get a sad feeling from it, but it's so beautiful. Again, lovely job, Pucks. 
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