The Missing Presence

by Crystal Aura 1/21/2010, 6:44 pm

Maturity: High / Fantasy: Medium

The Missing Presence

I scour to find,
I cannot recline

I miss you too much,
And after all this searching,

I'll need a crutch,
And I'll ask you to take care of my heart

You know it has it's proper place with you...

I'll keep searching for you with the rest of my essential being,
I am asking for you to search for me too, please don't make me start begging

Please leave no stone unturned, love
Please find me at my limit, please take my hand, intertwine our fingers, and feel that I have shed blood for us

To be with you,
For us to meet at my limitations
At most radiant of situations

I expected you'd delight me,
Tickle me pink, return every smile, and stroke away the tears,
And regain all those years...

But when I found out you've given me up,
Seems I had done nothing to fufil

Seeing you again...
Because you didn't value me the way I valued you,
You didn't bid me welcome

You didn't come...
Now you will be nothing to me but a jot of pain,
Not caring that I strained

You will be something I can acess in my ability to remember,
Thank you for leaving at least an echo behind
Remembering me why I shall be a bleeder
Because of what you did, the blood just leaving one streamline...

Coursing down the gaping hole in my chest,
Where my heart used to be

So thank you,
For the far-off, distant memories

...Missing Presence...

by **rattyjol** 1/21/2010, 9:12 pm

Whoa. o.0 LOVE IT.

by Crystal Aura 1/21/2010, 9:22 pm

Thanks, I feel I've been pretty bad at poetry lately, so... I really appreciate it, Ratty. Tell everyone I'm 'back' in the poetry compartment... I feel I'm good at it again, confident in it Smile

by **Komoda** 1/21/2010, 9:25 pm

Whoa. That's WONDERFUL, Crystal! I love it so much. :3

by Crystal Aura 1/21/2010, 9:28 pm

Thank-you, Komoda. You've always been so pleasurable. Smile

by **Komoda** 1/21/2010, 9:29 pm

You're very welcome! Very Happy

by Crystal Aura 1/22/2010, 4:18 pm

Right on,

by **Jinx** 1/22/2010, 4:19 pm

*Applauds*

by Crystal Aura 1/22/2010, 4:46 pm

Aw, thanks a million! smitten

by wolflover96 1/22/2010, 5:52 pm

whoa is right-awesomeness! Cool

by Crystal Aura 1/22/2010, 6:09 pm

Thank you!! righton

by wolflover96 1/22/2010, 6:15 pm

your welcome!

by Crystal Aura 1/23/2010, 9:59 am

Yeah,

by **shadowsowner888** 1/23/2010, 10:03 am

Awww, that's so sad! :/ The first half of the poem sorta reminds me of myself . . . Great job. x3

by Crystal Aura 1/23/2010, 10:27 am

Really? Whoa, coolsmiley

by DiscardedHarmony 1/23/2010, 10:05 pm

D: Aww, the MC seems like she/he's about to cry... Where you say "and I deserve to, too" that seems really awkward, but the rest was spectacular Smile

by Crystal Aura 1/24/2010, 4:52 pm

Lalala...

Well, I love it now...

by Crystal Aura 1/24/2010, 4:53 pm

DiscardedHarmony wrote:D: Aww, the MC seems like she/he's about to cry... Where you say "and I deserve to, too" that seems really awkward, but the rest was spectacular

What part?

(It got deleted.. -_-)

by DiscardedHarmony 1/24/2010, 5:03 pm

Crystal Aura wrote:
DiscardedHarmony wrote:D: Aww, the MC seems like she/he's about to cry... Where you say "and I deserve to, too" that seems really awkward, but the rest was spectacular

What part?

(It got deleted.. -_-)

Oh... Never mind then. rolleyes