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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/15/2010, 12:49 pm

A little poem I wrote today. Like a Star @ heaven I'm thinking about putting something else in the middle, but I couldn't find the right words and I have mucho homework to do today. Ah well.



For a moment there it felt like yesterday
Like everything was forgotten and put away.
It felt like old times, when it was me and you
I can't help smile, and forget the blues.
For the day you went back to your old ways
And I accepted things I couldn't change


Then someone snapped and I opened my eyes
And that was the moment that I realized.
That was back then and this is right now
It will always be a mystery how
Something so good turned to something average
And all you can do is just shake your head
Put on a happy face for the press
And walk away with something less.
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Post by Avé 2/15/2010, 2:16 pm

You never showed this one to me, Foreign. xD Maybe 'cause we haven't really been able to communicate, but oh well. I love it. It's cool. =D
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/15/2010, 4:28 pm

Yes, the communication has been quite shabby. Tsk tsk. xD Anyways, I just wrote it today in like... five minutes. I didn't have much time to show it to you anyways. o.0
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Post by Imagine 2/15/2010, 6:28 pm

Thats really cool! I love the last two lines.
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/15/2010, 9:40 pm

Thank you! Smile
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Post by Imagine 2/15/2010, 10:17 pm

You're welcomez. =)
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/15/2010, 11:25 pm

Awesome job, that weird girl! :3 (I'm sorry! xD That's what you have as a nickname!)
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/16/2010, 2:04 pm

Haha, thanks! I should really change that nickname... xD
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