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Post by Avé 3/17/2010, 1:07 am

ON JEALOUSY'S WINGS
(Shadow... this is for you. Very Happy)

I was born into this life
I was born without a voice
Had no say in how I lived
And it left me with no choice

So I had to run away
Or else fate would kill me soon
Under this veil of night,
I was spied on by the moon

And so I got away
Still afraid that they would chase
They'd have no trouble finding me
In such an open place

Though emotions get the best
Of how we live & what we say
I can promise you I'll find
A colorful shades of gray

Tell me, would you believe me
If you asked me who I am
And I slightly hesitated
I took the prize and ran

See these sky, it's crying blood
And the clouds are bleeding rain
I didn't know that this could happen
I think I must have gone insane

Maybe I don't quite know
What the future really brings
But I know it's not the day
To ride on jealousy's wings

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Post by CookieMonster 3/17/2010, 1:31 am

Really awesome poem! I really love the last stanza. nod
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/17/2010, 4:20 pm

*MEEEEEP* <3

(I do believe I liked that. Very Happy)
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Post by Avé 3/17/2010, 4:42 pm

xD

Thanks, you two. Smile
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/18/2010, 10:17 am

ZOMG. Amazing, Ave!

Your poems are always wonderfully amazing, Ave. I'll admit it. smiley
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