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Maturity: Teenage relationships and depression. :O
Fantasy: Well, it says "took off," so we can assume he was flying. xD
Basically, this is entirely based on Fang by James Patterson. Yes, it made me this excited. If you were planning on reading it, you shouldn't have even come this far . . . unless you want spoilers that bad. xD
And guess what? I've already recorded it! :O Not such a great tune, unoriginal chords . . . mehness. But I like it anyway. Maybe you shall too. Here's the vid!
Fantasy: Well, it says "took off," so we can assume he was flying. xD
Basically, this is entirely based on Fang by James Patterson. Yes, it made me this excited. If you were planning on reading it, you shouldn't have even come this far . . . unless you want spoilers that bad. xD
And guess what? I've already recorded it! :O Not such a great tune, unoriginal chords . . . mehness. But I like it anyway. Maybe you shall too. Here's the vid!
Come Back
You left me
You didn’t care
What it did to me
You just took off to who knows where
I stare out the window
And call your name
This is my new low
Why did you have to make things change?
CHORUS
I need you
I need you
Here in my arms
When you’re gone
When you’re gone
My life crashes into dark
I don’t want anybody else
You’re the only one for me
Who could replace you?
Come back to me.
(end chorus)
Remembering the time
Our lips first met
Knowing you were mine
The same was going through your head
Now all I
Have is memories
Of your dark eyes
That smile
Just for me
Now it’s gone . . .
CHORUS
I need you
I need you
Here in my arms
When you’re gone
When you’re gone
My life crashes into dark
I don’t want anybody else
You’re the only one for me
Who could replace you?
Come back to me.
BRIDGE
You’ve got guts
If you think saying you love me
Will stop the hurt
You know that
Only one thing
Will make me happy:
Your return
Come back,
Please come back.
I miss you too.
I know it’s hopeless.
I know you’re gone.
But can a girl dream?
(end bridge)
CHORUS
I need you
I need you
Here in my arms
When you’re gone
When you’re gone
My life crashes into dark
I don’t want anybody else
You’re the only one for me
Who could replace you?
Come back to me.
You left me
You didn’t care
What it did to me
You just took off to who knows where
I stare out the window
And call your name
This is my new low
Why did you have to make things change?
CHORUS
I need you
I need you
Here in my arms
When you’re gone
When you’re gone
My life crashes into dark
I don’t want anybody else
You’re the only one for me
Who could replace you?
Come back to me.
(end chorus)
Remembering the time
Our lips first met
Knowing you were mine
The same was going through your head
Now all I
Have is memories
Of your dark eyes
That smile
Just for me
Now it’s gone . . .
CHORUS
I need you
I need you
Here in my arms
When you’re gone
When you’re gone
My life crashes into dark
I don’t want anybody else
You’re the only one for me
Who could replace you?
Come back to me.
BRIDGE
You’ve got guts
If you think saying you love me
Will stop the hurt
You know that
Only one thing
Will make me happy:
Your return
Come back,
Please come back.
I miss you too.
I know it’s hopeless.
I know you’re gone.
But can a girl dream?
(end bridge)
CHORUS
I need you
I need you
Here in my arms
When you’re gone
When you’re gone
My life crashes into dark
I don’t want anybody else
You’re the only one for me
Who could replace you?
Come back to me.
Last edited by shadowsowner888 on 3/22/2010, 6:27 pm; edited 1 time in total
Re: Come Back
I've never read Fang, or Maximum Ride, for that matter, but this is epic, Shadow -- nice job.
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I haven't read MR, but that's amazing! As I said on your blog, you should totally send some of your songs to a music label or something.
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Thanks Wolf!
Woah, really, Ratty? ^^ I can't believe you think they're that good! Thank you.
Woah, really, Ratty? ^^ I can't believe you think they're that good! Thank you.
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Ooh you sing very well! And I love the guitar (you play it awesomely) and the lyrics.
The lyrics are apt xD Poor Max.
The lyrics are apt xD Poor Max.
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Ooh. Good. Luv it. Send it to JP and tell him to bring Fang back.
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You totally should. But first you hafta help me write something good to send as well.
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ZOMG - did you see at the end of the book, about a little contest to write one of the MR chapters? I SHOULD PUT THE SONG IN A CHAPTER.
And you, you should write a very threatening letter and then a poem about your deepest sorrows.
And you, you should write a very threatening letter and then a poem about your deepest sorrows.
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'Cept Max isn't a poet. xD
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I know. xDD My idea was that perhaps Nudge felt sorry for Max and somehow got this popular singer person to write Max a song (possibly with Angel's influencing help).
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Ooh. Good idea.
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Awesome Shadow!
Very accurate, and of course like everyone else said Epic!
You’re an amazing singer! You should try out for American idol, I’m dead serious.
Love the lyrics, keep on writing.
~Erin
Very accurate, and of course like everyone else said Epic!
You’re an amazing singer! You should try out for American idol, I’m dead serious.
Love the lyrics, keep on writing.
~Erin
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Great job, Shad!!! And to all of you who have read FANG, (Especially Amanda) you know Fang is gonna come back. That or Max is gonna go find him.
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Aww, thank you! ^^
I sure hope so, but I personally kinda want Max to end up with Dylan while Fang's gone. xD I feel bad for the guy, you know?
I sure hope so, but I personally kinda want Max to end up with Dylan while Fang's gone. xD I feel bad for the guy, you know?
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Amazing, Shad! I love the guitar. And the singing of course.
Yeah, I think Max will probably end up with Dylan for a while. Who knows, she might even be with him when Fang comes back. Which, of course, would create problems. But Fang will definately come back.
Yeah, I think Max will probably end up with Dylan for a while. Who knows, she might even be with him when Fang comes back. Which, of course, would create problems. But Fang will definately come back.
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That would defintly be extremely AWKWARD xD
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I'd like to see how that unfolds. Lol
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YUSH. Dylan+Max=Single Fang. HE IS MINE. xD
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