☼ The Couples Cruise ~ S.S. Hook Up ☼ {PARTY ON THE DECK!}

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[[LEAH!}]

[[Anyway, I feel like I'm not improving in writing over the years. Maybe like writing a whole suck-ish story of mine... Again. I need advice of what I need to improve on. I know detail is top on my list, just my itouch kinda prevents it from happening. But I should have no excuse, so shame on me. I feel like I'm slacking. xP So, since your a really good writer [I prefer u over Stephenie meyer], I decided to turn to u for advice. That is all. Lol]]

[[Srry. I had to type that on my itouch. xP]]

[oh boy i'm flattered. And I'm tired, so this may not come out right, but...

You have to write something that inspires you, or that you honestly just love to write about. Like you want to come home every day and add to it, rather than forcing yourself to work on it.

Also, adopt words and techniques from other great writers on the sight - Shad, Manda(Jesus4Eternity), etc. I always pick up little bits an pieces of stories that I like, not copying just adapting to a new style of writing, to help me improve.


Also, Dictionary.com is my best friend. Rather than reusing a word again I go to the thesaurus and find new stuff. No it sounds weird, but trust me, it helps. xD

Finally, just practice everyday. I always find it harder to write when I'm stressed out(unless the stress inspires a new story), and I always write my best at my 'writing streak of the day', which for me is, sadly, midnightish-3 a.m... Also, try to relate to yourselves in stories, and be realistic.

Life isn't a fairytale, everyone has those awkward moments and a lot of peple say 'um' or 'uh' and stuff like that. Also rather than saying "blah blah," she said, you could switch it up like saying "blah blah," she said, momentarilly pausing to catch her breath, "lalalala." something like that.

Hope I helped at all... Au Revoir!]]

[[it's fine!


Goodnight!

Hope I helped (:]]

[[Haha. Thanks. Will do. I'm tired]]

Hearts wrote:[Cassie - I was looking for an island for my story, so I found this place called Santa Catalina Island.

So I went on this website to find a pic.

So an hour later this guy I know(who is visiting CA) was like "See this picture?"*he sent me the link to the same website* and thenhe was like "I can see that from my backyard.

And you know what's even WEIRDER? you know AVALON estate my rp? I had NEVER heard about this island before, but apparently AVALON is a city in there!

I'm like so freaked out right now.]]

[Omigod. It's like he's a stalker. XDDD]

[[Rp anyone?]]

[[I would, but I'm too embarassed to RP here anymore.]]

[[Why? You shouldn't be, on the last page I just asked for help with my rping.]]

[[No, I sorta got dissed yesterday so I'm to embarassed... ): ]]

[[Cummon, just rp. And do you mean one of your characters?]]

[Everyone gets 'dissed' in their life. And in my veiw, you didn't get dissed. You got confused and skipped something and blamed it on a desise. ALl the HEarts said was that she didn't think it was an excuse. That was HER point of veiw. It's an opinion, and shouldn't harm you to not RP. I got embarressed several times and I just laughed it off. It's all behind you. ]

[[Oh. I'm guessing I missed an arguement yesterday.....]]

[[Well I've been dissed everywhere, never online. It actually hurt me because I am distracted too easily and sometimes it doesn't allow me to read certain things. So I missed out on the 'richest person in the world' thing. And the richest person in the world is some old dude with like over a trillion dollars or so. And drama gets to me like a rcok gets to water, it sinks into me and doesn't go away.]]

[Then how did you get over all the times you got dissed. Never RPing on here is like someone saying that your favirote food looks disgusting and you never eat it again fo what THEY think. And I know who is the richest person in the world. But since your not allowed to make real people on this RP, I made my charries that.]

[[I've always never gotten over being dissed..... I remember every single time I was dissed by my best friend's and even though they apologized I didn't get over it for a few years.]]

[You said you never got over you being dissed and then at the end you said you did? And, knowing Hearts personally, she didn't TRY to diss you.]

[[Honestly, you have to get over things. That's why our minds don't remember things, to help protect us. And, you just have to move on. Like I know everyone's friends tease them and stuff, but you just have to forgive them and move on. It happens all the time, or you go and get new friends. Simple as that. xP

And really, I wasn't trying to 'diss' you. I wasn't singling you out for not remembering; if I didn't know Cassie personally there's no way I would have remembered. It's fine, you just forgot or didn't read it. I understand. But having ADD, it just makes me angry when people use it as an excuse, when I really don't think it's an excuse at all. That's it, wasn't trying to embarass you :\

I'm watching Aladin (:]]

[You love Disney, Emffers. XDD]

[[I do (: Not even so much disney, just the movies. Except for Snow White. she's annoying. xD]]

[[She is annoying. xD]]

[Lol... I sorta like her. Except when she sings. I'm like 'shut up!']

[[Haha yeah. "WHO DARE DISTURBS MY SLUMBERRRR" hahahaha I love that big cat-cave guy.]]
[[rp anyone?]]