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Post by Fareorn 4/10/2010, 7:20 pm

Yeah.. I've had the following poems floating around me ol' noggin for a while. Comment if you so wish.
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Post by Avé 4/10/2010, 7:26 pm

Can't wait to see them. x3
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Post by Fareorn 4/10/2010, 7:32 pm

First one:

Soul of Animals

The bear's growl,
the cat's yowl,
and the wolf's howl.
All three spirit
Most creatures fear it.
The wolf's howl keening,
the cat's yowl meaning,
the bear's growl demeaning
to every creature meager at birth,
but meant to cleanse the Earth
of the monstrosities of Man
through with pure zen
they shall purge, bring peace and teach what we should learn;
for what we should for yearn
is the peace of the world
without the tactics of yold.
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Post by Fareorn 4/10/2010, 7:34 pm

Life be wild
Life be as child
Life be great
Unless it's too late
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 4/10/2010, 8:02 pm

Awesome! grin

Ps. Love the swords. But I liked better the average colored ones.. Razz
Oh and. Didja get my Pm? O,o
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Post by Fareorn 4/10/2010, 8:14 pm

Yes I did Shadow. I haven't checked it out though.
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Post by Avé 4/10/2010, 8:44 pm

I absolutely love the first one. Smile
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Post by Fareorn 4/10/2010, 9:34 pm

Thanks Ave. Smile That was the first poem I ever made. So I'm glad you liked it.
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/11/2010, 8:38 am

Both poems are great, but I really liked the first one, too. :3
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