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Post by SaddleClub 4/12/2010, 10:22 pm

You appeared
Like a dream
Magical
Is how it seemed

You were there
You made me smile
You made me laugh
For a while

It didn't last long
Oh, how time flies!
It seemed all too soon
When you had to say goodbye

Sometimes I worry
You'll disappear
And just leave me hanging
Yes, that's what I fear

You barely know me
Why would you stay?
You have good friends
That you see every day

Though I only knew you
An hour or two
You're always on my mind
And I really miss you

I won't lose touch
I won't let you go
But will you remember me?
I really want to know....
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Post by LuckyPenny666 4/12/2010, 10:32 pm

Aw, that's a great and meaningful poem, Saddle. Smile I like the last stanza.
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Post by SaddleClub 4/12/2010, 10:39 pm

Thanks, Lucky *insert awkward smiley I don't feel like posting here*
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/12/2010, 10:57 pm

Aw, I've felt like this sometimes. *sigh* Great job, Saddle. x3
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Post by SaddleClub 4/12/2010, 10:58 pm

I'm glad peoples like my poems even though they're all pretty much depressing
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Post by LuckyPenny666 4/12/2010, 11:16 pm

xD Niiiiice.
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Post by SaddleClub 4/12/2010, 11:25 pm

I wrote a happy one, though!
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Post by Puckspaw 4/13/2010, 7:08 pm

Great job! =D
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Post by SaddleClub 4/13/2010, 7:18 pm

Thanks, Puck
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