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I'll wait for you, but I cant wait forever

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Post by minimaid 4/29/2010, 10:02 pm

I am invinsble,
Lying your way through life,
Lying to yourself,
Will get you no where,
Above me,
I never relized you were,
Then you stroke out at me,
Failing to fix the finished prodect,
Ofcourse this is just so you,
Real?,
You are not,
Obviously we both have issues,
Unnanimasily agreed,
But both denied,
Underneath the blanket of blood,
The remanders of myself,
Incredably, but barley there,
Can someone hear me?,
Annoyed, more so at you, then myself,
Nailing your coffin shut,
Trembling the fact you went first,
Wait!, I exclaimed,
And...,
I jumped inside the grave,
Then they nailed my coffin shut,
Failed, I had,
Organized religion had it's way with me,
Relizing where I was,
Ever not knowing,
Victorious, you were,
Except you took me down in the way,
Real smooth.





This probably makes no sence to others. xD
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Post by Avé 4/30/2010, 7:27 am

Rae, I absolutely love this one. <3
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/30/2010, 5:50 pm

The way I interpreted it made sense! Very Happy But that's the thing about poems, who knows if the interpretations are ever right . . . XD Great job with this one. :3
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