Dark Dreams and Darker Fairytales
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Dark Dreams and Darker Fairytales
by Dark Fairytales 5/1/2010, 8:01 pm
Dark Dreams
And Darker Fairytales
And Darker Fairytales
Inspiration:
I honestly was sitting in my room, trying to fall asleep and had the idea. I immediately wrote the intro, but didn't really plan on the rest of the story. I suggest the chapters will be long, but honestly I don't know where I am going with this, so I will only add new chapters when I get some more inspiration. Any ideas just PM me.
I honestly was sitting in my room, trying to fall asleep and had the idea. I immediately wrote the intro, but didn't really plan on the rest of the story. I suggest the chapters will be long, but honestly I don't know where I am going with this, so I will only add new chapters when I get some more inspiration. Any ideas just PM me.
Characters:
Rain -- Main Character, female, vampire
Rizzo -- Male, vampire, the one who turned Rain into a vampire
Rain -- Main Character, female, vampire
Rizzo -- Male, vampire, the one who turned Rain into a vampire
Introduction
I felt a cold wind brush against my skin. I could feel goosebumps against my fingers that were hanging limp at my sides. It didn’t feel like I was wearing much, and the only thing I could remember was blood. And pain. I tried to go deeper into the past, but I couldn’t remember anything. It took me a while to recover my senses. I slowly began to notice that I was lying on crunchy leaves, and a word flashed across my mind. Autumn. I knew what the word meant, but I couldn’t explain it to myself. I didn’t know how I knew all of this information that flashed across my mind. 2+2=4. I finally noticed that my eyes were closed, and when I opened them, all I could see were tall trees with colorful leaves. Browns, yellows,reds, oranges, so many colors. I finally gave up trying to explain things I knew, but didn’t know how I knew. I sat up, slowly, my joints creaking silently, and looked at my clothes. There was a white rag tied around body as a shirt, and another as a skirt. They were soaked with red, blood. I felt some pain in the right side of my neck, and grabbed it, wondering what was wrong. All I felt were two holes crusted with dry blood. A memory flooded into my mind of a rather ugly .. monster maybe? .. sinking his teeth into my neck. I stood up, and started walking aimlessly in a pretty much random direction. I stumbled through the moss, leaves, and tree roots, making my way around large pines. The trees kept growing thicker and thicker, until I tripped over a rather large root that seemed to appear out of nowhere. I instinctively threw my hands out, and grabbed a large root for support. With strength I didn’t know I had, it crumbled under my touch and I fell on my face. I slowly stood back on my feet, rubbing dirt off my face and picking leaves from my hair, which was long, curly, and reached my waist with a brown flood of color. I shook off the slight pain, and made my way through some vines to find a large lake. I opened my mouth in awe at the beauty, to notice how dry my tongue was. I was very thirsty. I dropped to my knees in the damp floor, and drank some water. Although it quenched my thirst, I almost spit it out in complete horror. I thought water was supposed to be delicious, but it was metallic, and disgusting. I couldn’t think of what else I could possibly drink besides water. I did know one thing I could do in water though. I removed the rags, and dunked them in the water, washing the blood out. When there was no longer a drop of red on the white rags, I hung them on a tree branch to dry and jumped into the water myself. Cleaning the layer of dirt from my skin felt wonderful, and I swam around happily until I saw the rags were dry. Then I climbed out, air dried my body, and out the rags back on neatly. I sat under the tree, thinking of what I could possibly drink the next time I get thirst. Suddenly, I heard a terrified scream kind of noise, and looked up to see a dead bird hit the branch. I looked at the bird sadly, and at his bleeding wing, when a drop of its blood fell into my mouth. And that was when I realized what it was that I was to drink. The blood was so delicious, and sweet, and I was eager for more. I stood up, and looked to my left to see… him. The one from my memory. The ugly beast with long hair, nails, or should I say claws, and a weird body structure. The one with fangs. The one who bit me and made me who I am now. A vampire.
I felt a cold wind brush against my skin. I could feel goosebumps against my fingers that were hanging limp at my sides. It didn’t feel like I was wearing much, and the only thing I could remember was blood. And pain. I tried to go deeper into the past, but I couldn’t remember anything. It took me a while to recover my senses. I slowly began to notice that I was lying on crunchy leaves, and a word flashed across my mind. Autumn. I knew what the word meant, but I couldn’t explain it to myself. I didn’t know how I knew all of this information that flashed across my mind. 2+2=4. I finally noticed that my eyes were closed, and when I opened them, all I could see were tall trees with colorful leaves. Browns, yellows,reds, oranges, so many colors. I finally gave up trying to explain things I knew, but didn’t know how I knew. I sat up, slowly, my joints creaking silently, and looked at my clothes. There was a white rag tied around body as a shirt, and another as a skirt. They were soaked with red, blood. I felt some pain in the right side of my neck, and grabbed it, wondering what was wrong. All I felt were two holes crusted with dry blood. A memory flooded into my mind of a rather ugly .. monster maybe? .. sinking his teeth into my neck. I stood up, and started walking aimlessly in a pretty much random direction. I stumbled through the moss, leaves, and tree roots, making my way around large pines. The trees kept growing thicker and thicker, until I tripped over a rather large root that seemed to appear out of nowhere. I instinctively threw my hands out, and grabbed a large root for support. With strength I didn’t know I had, it crumbled under my touch and I fell on my face. I slowly stood back on my feet, rubbing dirt off my face and picking leaves from my hair, which was long, curly, and reached my waist with a brown flood of color. I shook off the slight pain, and made my way through some vines to find a large lake. I opened my mouth in awe at the beauty, to notice how dry my tongue was. I was very thirsty. I dropped to my knees in the damp floor, and drank some water. Although it quenched my thirst, I almost spit it out in complete horror. I thought water was supposed to be delicious, but it was metallic, and disgusting. I couldn’t think of what else I could possibly drink besides water. I did know one thing I could do in water though. I removed the rags, and dunked them in the water, washing the blood out. When there was no longer a drop of red on the white rags, I hung them on a tree branch to dry and jumped into the water myself. Cleaning the layer of dirt from my skin felt wonderful, and I swam around happily until I saw the rags were dry. Then I climbed out, air dried my body, and out the rags back on neatly. I sat under the tree, thinking of what I could possibly drink the next time I get thirst. Suddenly, I heard a terrified scream kind of noise, and looked up to see a dead bird hit the branch. I looked at the bird sadly, and at his bleeding wing, when a drop of its blood fell into my mouth. And that was when I realized what it was that I was to drink. The blood was so delicious, and sweet, and I was eager for more. I stood up, and looked to my left to see… him. The one from my memory. The ugly beast with long hair, nails, or should I say claws, and a weird body structure. The one with fangs. The one who bit me and made me who I am now. A vampire.
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Re: Dark Dreams and Darker Fairytales
by shadowsowner888 5/1/2010, 10:48 pm
:3 Nice job! I like your plotline, and though it does feel to me like it's moving a bit quickly, I'm enjoying the story. ^^ Keep working on it, please!
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Re: Dark Dreams and Darker Fairytales
by Dark Fairytales 5/2/2010, 12:11 am
Thanks ! That was just the introduction, the rest of the story will be a little ahead in time, I know that for sure. Maybe about a year. I will definately work on it, I find that going on walks alone helps bring me ideas.
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Re: Dark Dreams and Darker Fairytales
by shadowsowner888 5/2/2010, 8:13 am
Cool! :3 And I think that's pretty amazing . . . *-* Walks help inspire me, too! Do you find listening to your iPod when you go is even more helpful?
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Re: Dark Dreams and Darker Fairytales
by Dark Fairytales 5/2/2010, 12:37 pm
Yes, I actually do. Usually if I pay much attention to the lyrics too, something comes to mind.
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