Untitled (Suggestions are appreciated)

by Puckspaw 5/14/2010, 3:55 pm

It's not my best poem, but oh well

I'm gonna dance in the rain
And refuse to pretend
Forget about the pain
And go against the trends
I'm gonna be who I wanna be
And ignore what people say
I won't worry about tomorrow
I'll just live for today
I'll say what I mean
And mean what I say
I'll stand my ground
And never run away
I'll live for the moment
And take my time to pray
I'll let people know they're loved
What if today is my last day?

by **shadowsowner888** 5/14/2010, 4:06 pm

:3 That's awesome, Puck! I really love this one because it's got an epic message, and says stuff about rain. applause

by Puckspaw 5/17/2010, 4:59 pm

Thanks Shadow! =D

by SoxPaws 5/17/2010, 5:12 pm

Rain is nice, in this peom, at least. Laughing

I like when it says,
"I'm gonna be who I wanna be
And ignore what people say
I won't worry about tomorrow
I'll just live for today"
Very nice, very inspiring.